|Reviews for Exact Change|
| The Keeper of Worlds chapter 2 . 2/7/2014
Simply amazing! Great story!
| zeonista13 chapter 2 . 1/21/2014
I really liked this one! :) It was a great Ranma-Nabiki romance story, as logically determined as only Nabiki could do it. I understand the amount of work being needed. Talahashi-sama's tendency to really push troubled relationships with her male & female leads made getting the requisite happy ending a lot of work! (She should know, the woman has never provided a satisfactory ending for 3 of them. ;P )
| Starfox5 chapter 2 . 1/1/2014
Very nice and moving story about Nabiki changing - and an interesting take on time travel.
| Raynze76 chapter 2 . 10/25/2013
Great story, am not much for Nabiki Ramna pairings but this one was well done.
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/6/2013
Ok 1st you criticize "Back to the Future" for their plot holes but then you not only use one of the potholes but break a rule of time travel
Plothole in the movie
if Marty left 1985 to go to 2015 to help his kid how can their be an old Marty let alone him having a family because he wasn't there
Plothole in the fic
How can Nabiki of been crippled because she wasn't there went Happosai's demon got loose as she was already in the future
You can't meet yourself
| Leiliah1014 chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
One awesome hidden Ranma/Nabiki Pairing. You must add this to that pairing category! This is worth reading! You're a genius, Ozzallos! :D Two thumbs up!
| Treant Balewood chapter 2 . 5/17/2013
I really love this story was alotta fun thanks for writing!
| Kau-chan101 chapter 2 . 5/8/2013
The time travel thing was confusing at first, but you get the hang of it after a while. Your stories, including this, are wicked! Keep it up! :D
| Blackholelord chapter 2 . 3/15/2013
Nice story. Not bad for a two chapter story.
| irnzenmonk chapter 2 . 2/24/2013
this is awesome story ne
| shugokage chapter 2 . 2/7/2013
A truly amazing story especially the time travel aspects good job!
| Yasha-HebiHime chapter 2 . 12/12/2012
A wonderful story once again. I've always been quite fond of the Nabiki / Ranma stories, as Nabiki seems to have more personality than Akane did, but tying it around time travel was definitely something I have not actually seen a Nabiki do. The conclusion was very sound and promising, and other than a typo here and there I can't find anything wrong with the story as a whole.
I only wish it had gone on a little longer, haha, but it's fine as it is. Happy writings.
| Dimriver chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
It is a fun read.
| CompYES chapter 2 . 8/26/2012
160 is a good number to be.
I love this story. You were the writer that turned me on to Nabiki/Ranma. Before this story, I just slogged through Ranma fanfiction trying desperately to find Akane/Ranma fics that didn't irritate me (and that usually only happened when the writers chose to write Akane as a reasonable human being or a redeemable violent tsundere who is rehabilitated).
All of my buttons for things I look for in good fanfiction are hit by your story. Your writing and writing style are good. You don't make a million spelling and grammar mistakes and really, that's the make or break point a lot of the time for me. Then of course, there's the time travelling. Gah. I'm constantly undone by time-travel done well. The way you did it was very well thought out too. It always makes me chuckle that Nabiki stumbled upon time travel on accident whilst collecting a debt. Seriously, only Nabiki. This story is a testament to the fact even with two intelligent individuals (incredibly intelligent on Nabiki's part) putting their noggins together, there are always a heap of things that can go wrong. Getting it right was constantly trial and error for Nabiki. It was her failed attempts that really made the story for me because she really is the kind of person who learns from her mistakes. And not just how to fix the situation, but how to fix herself as a person.
Ranma also made the story for me. His emotions were so clear even if the story wasn't being told from his point of view. Beside loving the great happy ending epilogue, my other favorite part was when Ranma got down to business once Nabiki passed him the letter. Both times really. It's so sad that the only people he could trust were himself and Kasumi. That the only home he'd ever known was the Tendo place despite how sucky his life can get there. While it's too bad it took such extreme circumstances to see Ranma for the noble person he really was, it was great to see her unravel a bit more of him each time she time traveled.
To wrap this very long review, I just want to say thank you very much for sharing this gem. I'm glad it didn't end up getting scrapped. It's still the best Nabiki/Ranma (and possibly Ranma in general) fanfic I've ever read. I know I'll continue revisiting this story for years to come.
Nana of CompYES
| Rexnos chapter 2 . 8/13/2012
Obviously not your most recent work, but I've been looking through all your work at the moment. I think the lack of a complete filter was leaving me hesitant from looking in and it seems more than a little mistake. Your have good plot, good character and generally good writing. I've found several typos, even in your more recent work, but not enough to detract from the overall product. Other than switching the appropriate filters to complete, there really isn't much I can give you in the way of constructive criticism. Now if you'll excuse me, I have another ten stories to read.