Reviews for Exact Change
Rose1948 chapter 2 . 11/11/2010
Wow. I just read this. Honestly don't remember if I read it before or not as nothing seemed familiar. This is great! Thanks for sharing!
chronodekar chapter 2 . 11/1/2010
I'm touched with this story. -sniff,sniff- It's just beautiful.

Though ..., why did you split it into 2 chapters when you posted it here on ? Even if they look small, I think it would have been better to read it in the original chapter-way you created this in.

Akane's behavior is OOC. Perhaps its because I'm sympathetic to her, but by the end of the manga, there is no-one else who understands Ranma's feelings better than her. Though, for this fanfic, bringing her out as a whining child DOES make sense. It's a good way to crawl Nabiki in.

And speaking of Nabiki, this is one of the better RN pairings I've ever seen. I like you way of thinking - using the Dojo as the focal point for them to get together, instead of ... well, ANOTHER lovesick girl wishing she could change things. And doing it this way, introduces a believable change to Nabiki.

Ozzallos, I'm guessing that you first posted this story on FFML ? I've never been on it, but I like that you put in the extra effort to format it for . There are some other authors who just cut-copy-paste their stories and due to the ***** way works, the formatting gets a little off and it gets distracting to read the story.

Thanks for this wonderful story Ozzallos !

-chronodekar
Tri-Emperor of The Twilight chapter 2 . 8/27/2010
Great story.
xXxMartelxXx chapter 2 . 8/25/2010
I get that it's virtually impossible to write a time-travel story, but even so, I think you did a fantastic job! I applaud all the points you made note of at the end in your author's notes.
Gseven chapter 2 . 5/14/2010
I know you will probably not do this, because you have quite a few irons in the fire. But I would like to see an expansion on this story, something of a sequel; but more of a stand aloe from the point of view of the manipulated chibi-Nabiki.

I realize that you are working very hard on Time Apart, equally good in my opinion (which I am waiting an update on). I enjoy your style of story telling. In depth and voluminous. That being said, a title like Exact Change 2: Change to Spare sounds good.

It needn't go over her training too deeply, but the things that happen when she meets Ranma the first time and then a few of the adventures after would be fun. Like the rescue of P-chan from Azusa, the Gymnastics battle.

Really just wishful thinking on my part. I'll keep up with what you write anyway. Keep up the good work.
shanejayell chapter 2 . 12/16/2009
*claps*

Okay, THAT was cool.
Noyesno chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
Great story!
Merme chapter 2 . 7/9/2009
Wow, that was awesome! I loved it! Everything was so interesting! The trips to the future, and the effort to prevent those futures, and then changing the past, it all worked so well and it kept me in the fic the whole time! I really loved the battle between Happosai and Ranma, you wrote it very well. I wish there had been some more parts about the new Nabiki is Ranma's fiancee thing, but the story doesn't need it, really. It'd just be cool to read about. :) I really loved this!
ShineX chapter 2 . 7/8/2009
Some of what you did with the time travel was confusing, but all in all this was one of the better Nabiki pairing fics I've come across. Very nice job (though I do wish I'd seen Ranma's reaction to this news)
Dothackfan chapter 2 . 5/31/2009
I really like this story but could you please find "Pocket Change" to go along with it? Even though the story could be an epilogue, it makes the story more complete.
Selthar chapter 2 . 1/10/2009
I've always liked this fic... but any chance on getting that secondary fic Pocket Change back?
stinkymonkey chapter 2 . 10/27/2008
I enjoyed this story greatly and I am not a huge fan of fan fiction. The character portrayal was consistent with the source material, the length was appropriate for the plot and there were not large numbers of spelling/grammar/inappropriate use of Japanese that can be distracting for the reader( I also appreciate the lack of forced sex/toilet humor that fan fiction seems to engender). The best part was a believable conflict and satisfying resolution. I am glad for the epilogue.

Thanks for writing this and will look for more of your stuff.
Computerfreak CK chapter 2 . 10/13/2008
A great story.

I really liked the way you gradually brought Ranma Nabiki together and how they overcame the problems in their lifes. Nice change to the standard time-travel genre to.

In all I can only commend you on your excellent stories (I liked your other stories to) and hope you keep up the good work.
Thurhame chapter 1 . 10/3/2008
Excellent story! I really liked your portrayal of Nabiki; I've seen too many stories with a simple Mercenary Nabiki guilt-inducing crisis Reformed Nabiki. I also enjoyed the way you draw the pair together gradually. Like most Ranma fics, your portrayal of Akane is a little harsh, but I'm not going to hold that against you. It's rare for me to find such high quality in fanfiction.

PS. There's a small typo in the first part. Before Nabiki visits the future for the first time, the text lists her input to the time machine as /09MAR1988 -1200hrs 00s 00ms instead of /09MAR1990 -1200hrs 00s 00ms.
Nosferatum chapter 2 . 9/8/2008
Very nice fic even if somewhat short. Great idea.
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