Reviews for Protecting Lloyd
JanieUchiha chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
wow..i loved that...is it supposed to be Lloyd talking bout Kratos? well anyway it is really good!
Lone Wolf Zakuro chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
Good I like it I however suck at poems.
Invader Tacos chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
*sad facail expression* I'll...I'll protect Lloyd, too...
RoyalFanatic chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
Poetry...school has forever changed my opinion of it...

But I did like this.

It's very cute. It made me think of kitties.

Zelos: Please don't ask...-_-

Zelos! *smacks him with paper fan* Anyway, keep up the good work!_
Jazzy-kid chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Hi agin. when are you getting a new chapter on that other one?Please hurry with that and nice poem I loved it.
Ark Navy chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Honestly, it was really good, but it lacked rhythm. Without such, it's hard to tell where one 'verse' starts and ends, then you end up more looking for the rhythm then visualing the poem itself.

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However, going over it a second time, it does prove to have some rhythm, but I still stand with my first statment.
Magic D Torrid chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
Hey, i ususally dont read poems, but i read this one. I like it very much, like the format and uh..the rythym? *doesnt know* .
Melody of Shadow chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
00 Wow.

I gotta say, I usually skip right over the poetry submissions in a section. For some -strange- reason, I decided to read this.

And I'm glad I did. It flows so perfectly...it's amazing.

In short...

-does the fangirly squeal- I love it! -