|Reviews for The Games|
| Clockwerk Crow chapter 2 . 11/11/2005
You're correct Kiro, I am lost...very, very lost. But good story so far, though.
Before I forget, you mention in the story Dr. Mario and Young Link are the same people at different times. Technically, wouldn't that rule also apply to Zelda and Shiek, or am I just insane? Wait...don't answer that...
Anyway, update soon. I'll review the next chapters as soon as I see 'em.
| joebthegreat chapter 2 . 9/18/2005
I DEMAND AN UPDATE NOW!
MONEY IS WORTH SOULS!
PLEASE UPDATE IM BORED!
LNKN PRK WENT TO MAI HOSE! PWNAGE! TOTALY KOL! LMAO
seriously... IM DERANGED!...
so UPDATE BEFORE THE KAZZJAFF KILLS US BOTH!
| Joeb chapter 2 . 9/15/2005
ahh yes this reminds me much of my pathetic youth... you were right the only problems here WAS in grammar... and I make those too so oh well... (there were less mistakes so good job!)
but you have this listed as a Parody/Humor and so far I haven't seen anything really whacky or funny or whatever the crap you want me to see.
So here is my suggestion... make a... crazy moment... thats what I call them... do what you are normally doing and suddenly take a word out of thin air and exaggerate the results... put in scenes from a movie or something you liked and make everyone hate it... torture your smashers...
oh and dont do what I just did... rambling off into a big block is kinda bad for the readers...
but seriously try to... put more Umph in the jokes... make me fall out of my seat laughing... if you dont want a horror parody... at least make them exaggerate and go crazy... they all need their own stupid hated personality... and dont be afraid to offend idiots...
I know I'm not that good with grammar and spelling but try to put more randomness in it... ok fine I'm shutting up now...
| ChiptuneImpulse chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
For some reason I can't leave my stories with paragraphs. Also I did spell check, it might be grammer but I suck at that. Anyways I hope to update sometime in the next two weeks. Also I can't get the cut out line for the begining and ending of a story for some weird reason. Also I'm trying to to reffer to the smashers as a gang, if you know what I mean. I know that They're called Master hand and Crazy hand but I was lazy that day and I think someone was watching me type that day. 0_0. Anyways I'm open to suggestions to this tournament thing. One thing I don't do is anything referring to somethin being ripped off. Oh I made a mistake with the game its supposed to be "Taser Tag". Anyways that all and I hope that the other chapters are better.
| Razzkat chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Short chapter...but interesting. There were a couple of errors here and there, so be sure to check over your work. But pretty good and funny _.
| RoyalFanatic chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
I wanna know what Marth's wish is! I shall review!
Bowser: What about my wish?
Later, B-man. I review!_
| joebthegreat chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
I already know that Marth wants to be bald alright!
but i suggest you check the spelling... i make mistakes and all but at least try to make it readable... i spent more time than anyone ever should on something that short...
I WILL KEEP READING... SO YOU MUST MAKE ME HAPPY... or dont but then the death of this random baby will be on your hands...