Reviews for A Horse and His Cabbit
NexusRider161 chapter 11 . 4/14
Just binged the entire fic. The half was weird but enjoyable, but the second half progressed way too fast, and Ranma is rather OOC throughout. Ranma seemed to fall in love with Ryo-Ohki waaaaay too quickly, and the fact that he ended up paired with Ryo-Ohki at all was kind of a turn-off. Sure, he may not have actually been related to Lin-Ohki by blood, but he still pretty much adopted her/him as a little sister/brother, and Ryo-Ohki is her/his mom! You also didn't address the whole "fiancée" issue, and Genma seemed to just suddenly disappear after a few appearances "on screen". What happened? Why didn't the panda bring up the Tendo engagement? Try to blackmail Ranma using his son's sense of honor? What happened to Ukyo? Hell, the Musk may have been dealt with, but without Ranma there, what will happen to the Amazons when Saffron awakens? There are just so many loose ends and plot holes that this fic looks like a toddler's favorite blanket after five years of wear and tear without repair.
maryjane5000 chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
Good start but wish you kept Ranma as Maoling a little longer (maybe another chapter or 1\2 a chapter) before restoring him
You should have had Ranma say something like "When I arrived here I saw a cute girl that I considered asking out but then so Xianpu your punishment is to live with the fact that from now on I'll only ever see you as my sister, my friend and nothing more then that"
Guest chapter 2 . 5/17/2016
having read ch2 of this story i think you need to be informed of the silver rule: do not do to others that which you would not have done to yourself.
Balthanon chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
The random giant talking rat curse is a bit of an odd choice...
i like cheese chapter 5 . 10/3/2015
well, that's it for me. it all just kinda feels artificial and forced. the amazons basically raped his very being, played god with his identity, and he does shit about it? it's not that that outcome isn't possible so much as you didn't even make it a struggle. then the magic acting doesn't feel like a naturally developing situation. just a bunch of stuff you thought might be cool and forced it all into a ball of words.
Axcel chapter 3 . 6/12/2015
Ranma, not saying girls are weak, but the amazons do a bad job of showing it. They cheat when they fight you, they lock you out of fear and jealousy and greed, and they took your fighting memories. Their actions thus far have all screamed "weak" and "cowardly".
Axcel chapter 1 . 6/12/2015
Personally, I'd take Shampoo with me and wipe out the village so they can't keep hurting people.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2015
Completely unbelievable that Ranma would make friends with the people who raped her just because they were sorry. That's so stupid.
spicarus chapter 11 . 8/20/2014
Still, I wonder what Genma had to say when he found his son (and Nodoka) again and Ranma informed his father of his won marriage to Ryo-ohki.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/9/2014
I give up, this got stupid. Now Cologne is captain of Lin-ohki? Not believable. She pays no realistic consequences for what she did to Ranma and now a cabbit picks her as captain? There's no reason to bash Colgne but you can't have her act like a villain and suddenly be a good guy. She was evil and stopped only because Ranma became too strong. That's not a person you suddenly trust. Dumb.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/9/2014
Interesting fic except Ranma sometimes acts like an angsty little loser.
fellow chapter 11 . 3/1/2014
Pretty cool.
shugokage chapter 11 . 4/10/2013
Incredible story thank you and great job!
irnzenmonk chapter 11 . 12/6/2012
great story ne
Guest chapter 8 . 9/19/2012
"I hope that you won't continue to practice that vulgar display of macrophagia in this house." This was Ayeka pontificating.


So Ayeka hopes he/she doesn't continue to practice that vulgar display of White Blood Cells... The hell this doesn't make any sense
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