|Reviews for Exile|
| Magery chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
Even by my standards, that was one of the most, well, creepifying things I've ever read. Especially the last few sections.
| SomeStrangeDay chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
ok, im confused but im not. i think i might get it...but im pretty sure i like it
| a.different.luna chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
| XfallenstarO chapter 1 . 4/23/2008
I love the style!
| Rob-girl chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
this was ok, but you've definitely written better stories.
| L. Chandler chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
Ahh so agnsty, but at the same time I sort of liked the little grinning part at the end, it gave the piece that little bit of uncertainty needed in a story to provoke any thought at all.
| mysticVigil chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
Oh... twisty ending. Me likey.
In all seriousness, this is just so cool. Never seen a take on HP like this... or, rather, I've never seen a well-written one that I've taken the time to read and review before. Kudos.
I love the style. Run-on, and choppy-ish and just beautiful and poetic. Short and sweet. The italics also add something great, and I love love love the hints and obscurity. I give you two thumbs up and your choice of a donut.
And now I click the little buttons to add a favourite author...
| Charity F chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
O! the dark lord and lady of the night...uncomparable...unbeatable...undead...
i love it! he is doomed, she is doomed...wow! immense feeling of power...very intense...kind of hopelessness...aurora of no return...and that is fate...
keep the good stuff comin luv,
| autumn.in.mist chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
Ack. Stupid Harry. Why'd he break up with her anyways? Good story though! *adds dress-without-sleeves to favourite author list*
| remy-moon chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
ERG! Left speechless AGAIN! Twice in one day. ::growl:: But even though I'm speechless I've been able to choke out the following ::cough:: Ahem. Awesomeness as usual. Angst is good. Sad but somehow... right. (And that's all I could choke out. Sorry.)
| Black is the New Pink chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
I really like reading your short stories. You give it away a little at a time so you have to think and figure out what has happened and why. This was good.
| charmingly-holly chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Seriously praying this won't happen for real. Or not real, but, you know in the books. Since they're...not...real. :(
I like being in denial about the reality of them better.
Anyways, woderful even though he's evil now.
Gah. You've made me sniffly.
| Sabine Strohem-Moss chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
-is in awe-
...that was thrilling. I don't know what to say, but that it was amazing. I didn't catch onto the story until the 'dark lord' line (I blame my slowness on caffeine deprivation) and it blew me away.
Time to favorite-ize this!
| dancerrdw chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
cool i liked it
| opalish chapter 1 . 9/12/2005
Dude. The angst of these last two? Totally killing me ded. But what a way to go - so very well written and chilling. This one is beyond shocking; I'm pretty sure my jaw dropped at one point.
Methinks my penchant for italics is spreading. Mwahahahaha. Ha. Erm.
That said, I have a strange urge to read JoshDonna. I don't know why; I don't even know the characters...and yet. Woe.