Reviews for Did it hurt when you fell from Heaven?
Naja granger chapter 28 . 10/22/2014
y havnt u updated the remainings?
Guest chapter 18 . 7/5/2012
I was totally surprised it was Katy! the chicken pie had me in a fit of slient laughter
i do hope james IS trying to get lily jealous
overall, fabulous chappie
Guest chapter 16 . 7/5/2012
hilarious! i love lily in this
just too funny
i can tell youre probably a very funny person
Guest chapter 2 . 7/4/2012
very funny
Hannah X chapter 28 . 4/30/2012
Well, this is absolutely amazing. And i notice that it has been six years since updated. Any chance that could be changed? I would LOVE to keep reading :) :) ta.

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Chia-Adamou chapter 28 . 4/13/2011
hey i loved this story! I mean i loved it! it was really good, I killed myself laughing and most parts, please tell me when the next chp gonna be up? fanks and really really good story! :D
So 'blank' killed 'blank. Fin chapter 18 . 3/13/2011
"I eyeballed the blonde blob, which was all I could see of Katy through my hair. "And, er, why is it anything to do with you?" I asked her, imitating her voice perfectly. The effect was sort of ruined as I had my face pressed into the carpet, but the imitation was still pretty damn good."

This paragraph made me laugh so much, my roomate came into the living room to check if I was okay. Lovely work!

-Silvertongue
So 'blank' killed 'blank. Fin chapter 18 . 3/13/2011
"I eyeballed the blonde blob, which was all I could see of Katy through my hair. "And, er, why is it anything to do with you?" I asked her, imitating her voice perfectly. The effect was sort of ruined as I had my face pressed into the carpet, but the imitation was still pretty damn good."

This paragraph made me laugh so much, my roomate came into the living room to check if I was okay. Lovely work!

-Silvertongue
So 'blank' killed 'blank. Fin chapter 18 . 3/13/2011
"I eyeballed the blonde blob, which was all I could see of Katy through my hair. "And, er, why is it anything to do with you?" I asked her, imitating her voice perfectly. The effect was sort of ruined as I had my face pressed into the carpet, but the imitation was still pretty damn good."

This paragraph made me laugh so much, my roomate came into the living room to check if I was okay. Lovely work!

-Silvertongue
So 'blank' killed 'blank. Fin chapter 18 . 3/12/2011
"I eyeballed the blonde blob, which was all I could see of Katy through my hair. "And, er, why is it anything to do with you?" I asked her, imitating her voice perfectly. The effect was sort of ruined as I had my face pressed into the carpet, but the imitation was still pretty damn good."

This paragraph made me laugh so much, my roomate came into the living room to check if I was okay. Lovely work!

-Silvertongue
xoJaymexo chapter 28 . 3/1/2010
who is now *not* too lazy to log in- are you ever going to update this? cuz it's pretty freaking fantastic. :) would love to see how this ends... *hint hint wink wink*
xoJaymexo chapter 9 . 2/28/2010
who is too lazy to log in- I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY! it started off great with the title and the summary and then just go better and better and better! can't wait to keep reading!
JordanRLOL chapter 22 . 8/13/2009
I love this story so far.

I also like how in it your keeping to the book, seeing how they didn't start dating till the seventh...Yeah Its good.

Keep writting.
CharlieSchulz chapter 28 . 7/16/2009
Dammit! Now I'll never know how it's gonna end...
gonefishing5ever chapter 28 . 7/2/2009
A breif side-note:

FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS SUGARY AND GOOD WOMAN: UPDATE THIS STORY! I will cry my eyes out! I could understand if it was three weeks, a month; hell, even THREE months, but THREE YEARS! IT IS TOO BIG OF A WASTE TO LET THIS STORY GO! If you don't update I will become sad and go into spiralling depression and be forced to create a shrine to this story until you update. Also, I will annoy the shit out of you by review every chapter telling you to update and then send you dozens of personal messages until you update or admit you are working on chapter 29. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WITH ALL THE IS GOOD AND COMICAL IN THE WORLD ON TOP, I BEG, no GROVEL, FOR YOU TO PLEASE UPDATE! (I blame my patience level of a two-year old)

ON WITH THE REVIEW!:

I like James's characterazation. I don't really hate him. He seems like he's becoming nicer to Lily so I don't see a problem I think he's the right amount of arrogant and jerk-ish. I like that he smokes; it gives his character an edge (although it would be nice & slightly cute if he quit smoking because of Lily...). He was really sweet in this chapter! Poor Lily... she's torn on what to do... I think she's awesome! Lily is an overall great character too! She's spunky, clumsy, and has a great personality! I love all your characters and love how you refer to Peter(am I right?) as "Thingy". Hilarious!

So much drama in this chappy! GAH! I don't know what to do! I hope you update soon so we many readers can see how Lily solves this problem! No seriously. Update. Please?
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