Reviews for The Prisoner of Azkaban Returns
Guest chapter 13 . 8/12
I think it's atrocious that, especially given the amount of physical abuse you have had Harry subjected to by the Dursleys, you have also characterised Tonks as a girlfriend who frequently hits Harry. Why do you not see her violence against him as also being the abuse that it is? If you have difficulty with this concept, just swap the genders and see if that makes it clear for you. Imagine Harriet Potter, abused in the same way by the Dursleys, rescued by young Mr Naiad Tonks. They formed the same relationship as your characters have, including Tonks' possessiveness of Harriet in chasing away rivals, and of course his habit of hitting her or pinning her to the floor and tickling her into submission, any time Harriet says something he does not like. While it may sound amusing, to an unwilling victim tickling can be a form of torture. As a lifelong victim of abuse, Harry/Harriet would accept this behaviour as normal, of course.
I find it disturbing that you seem to.
Csar chapter 6 . 3/14/2017
With Harry in Ravenclaw, I don't see why you would have him take the same classes as in canon. You made a point of saying he's intelligent and curious about spell creation, why not have him taking arithmancy or ancient times. I also find it strange that while Harry is in a different house this house is having all the same classes as the Slytherins.
omh666 chapter 17 . 1/16/2017
Couple things about this chapter. First, they wonder why Padfoot didn't change back, summon Wormtail from Ron's robes, and take off with him in dog form again. But they know he doesn't have a wand. Second, Harry wonders why he can't capture Wormtail in the forest and they tell him that because Wormtail got away the first time, he has to get away this time. But, technically... they don't know Wormtail got away. They know he ran from Harry and Tonks after making himself impossible to summon, but who's to say someone wasn't standing there ready to catch him that time?
Lord Xanthos chapter 7 . 12/16/2016
Pathseekerme chapter 4 . 8/23/2016
You are correct; since Andromeda is a first cousin to Sirius, Tonks is a second cousin. And it looks as if Sirius has already found Harry... I am loving your RSeries. I've already read the first two stories in the last 20 hours, and have made a good start on this one. You're a terrific writer. Thanks for writing these; Harry seems s like just a normal, flawed, human pre-teen or teenager, depending on the story. I love the interactions between him and Tonks. and that Harry is not Superman.
Azaira chapter 4 . 8/9/2016
First, I do like the story - well written and engaging.

I can't understand why tonks wasn't visiting Harry daily. They tried the summer before, and now they don't even try? Wth? And andi believes the ministry crap? She knows more than most the bs they spew. She knows her family best as well. It's far more probable that andi just couldn't do anything about it having been cast out of her family.

There are so many little things that are actually quite annoying that I would have dropped the story if it wasn't good overall. i don't like how closely you fit the events and timelines though. It just doesn't really seem pertinent. But I think you're practically rewriting the books or something? I don't really know.
Jimbocous chapter 17 . 7/30/2016
Thanks for a great (re)read!
IIEarlGreyII chapter 18 . 2/17/2016
Boris is starting to get on my nerves, I mean he's just some random snake right? But he knows way too much about way too much. I like Harry having a snake, but I dislike this OP version of one who speaks way too much like a person than a snake.

Really. Do not like. The vamp kid.
Dude chapter 6 . 11/16/2015
Meteorite, not meteor.
OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 12 . 10/7/2015
Jerk is not the word I would use for you. Something the rhymes with punt would be much better.
OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 10 . 10/7/2015
Yawn. I guess I'm a masochist since I'm still reading this story. I can't wait for the next chapter where you say something in 1000 words that should've taken 200 at most. I also bet that it takes Harry 3 or 4 tries before he gets his patronus right. Those 3 or 4 tries will also take at least 1000 words to explain and then later a random 5-10 lines from Leon saying nothing of importance once again.
OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 9 . 10/7/2015
Is this copy and pasted from J.K's books? It just seems like you change around a few names and events and leave everything else the same.
TeganCappa chapter 8 . 10/7/2015
You seriously didn't need to have an entire chapter dedicated to the vampire. Nobody cares.
OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 8 . 10/7/2015
And we learn what we have already known forever! Leon is a VAMPIRE! OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH. Nobody seen it coming. Nobody. PACK IT UP PEOPLE. It can't be topped from here on out. Just kidding.
OllyOllyOxycodone chapter 7 . 10/7/2015
What is this bullshit with Pansy? This is becoming worse and worse.
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