|Reviews for The Demon Design|
| Escalus chapter 8 . 12/31/2007
Wondrous! Incredible cliffy! Update?
| TrunkZy chapter 8 . 10/12/2007
if you're still alive for goodness sake please update. This has got to be one of the most IC Artemis fics I have ever read. Kick Colfer off his high seat and take control. Artemis' relationship with his parents is so wonderfully written. Artemis Sr. is so lost when it comes to Artemis and Angeline is exactly what I had imagined her to be. and might I mention I loved the fake seuzure attact.
I just went stalking you and it seems that you are updating other fics. You know what this means. Fangirl!Attack.
Who cares that this is AU (The Lost Colony wasn't very good anyways).
| nazgurl chapter 8 . 9/23/2007
OMG! I love this fic! Artemis is very funny, the characters are all true to their...uh...character, and the plot is awesome! Humerous and well-written. The only thing I can say is to update quickly! FASTER! Impatient readers await!
| miroku-has-darkness chapter 8 . 8/7/2007
awesome update soon
| silberstreif chapter 8 . 7/10/2007
I really really hope that Artemis isn't blind... or at least isn't permanently blind. I mean he needs his eyes! But I liked the end. Next time he'll wait in the car *lol* I can't imagine what his parents would say if the saw him. ... But poor butler. He isn't a failure... it's just a bit much for ONE bodyguard to guard a boy against demons, humans, and all other things what lives... Butler go! You're a great bodyguard.
| Mistress of the Knight chapter 2 . 7/2/2007
Can I just give a gentle reminder (okay, a nag) that you have at least one devoted fan of your other stories (sorry, don't know much about FMA). Every time I get an update I'm hoping against hope that it's Hobo Potter, Scone's Anyone? or, especially, The Demon Design. I really admire someone who can juggle so many ideas but please, oh please, don't drop one of these balls!
| XxHuntressxX chapter 8 . 7/1/2007
update this fic now or suffer my rath!
i want to see what happened to poor arty!
| cringeynostalgia chapter 8 . 6/26/2007
*Squeals* Oh gosh, a cliffhanger, eh? Well, I guess I'll have to live with it DX I just hope you'll have mercy on me and update soon! :D I'll be waiting for the next chapter eagerly! :)
| Wolfgirl13 chapter 8 . 6/12/2007
Hey! Don't even worry about it. Your version is MUCH better. So please don't forget and not update. I'd love to see what's happening next! So is Artemix really blind now? Please continue soon! Thanks very much!
| XxXThe HuntressXxX chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
This fic is awesome! great write!
| Miako chapter 8 . 4/30/2007
You know, I found myself thinking something similar when i was reading it. Great story so far, I can't wait for more.
| knighted lioness chapter 8 . 4/29/2007
umm, im confused...is he actually blind, or is that what ALMOST happened? cus it'll be RELLI lame if he's blind...
| Nips chapter 8 . 4/29/2007
Ohmigod! Artemis! It's like every Clamp manga I've ever read is happening again! There better be some serious fairy healage coming up. Liek, srsly. If they can reattach eyes... ugh... Just picturing the injuries is too much. Especially with Artemis. I love the way you write him. He's so in character, and you do a great job of building upon as well as reinforcing his personality. I look forward to the next chapter!
| critic chapter 8 . 4/28/2007
Oh my god, please tell me there is some way to get Artemis's eyes back.
| Mistress of the Knight chapter 8 . 4/28/2007
Oh yipee! You have not abandoned this story! I am indescribably glad! I hope it won't sound too creepy of me to say that in my mind you are now a better writer that Eowan Colfer (spelling? Can't be bothered to check!). I too was disappointed in the Lost Colony. PLEASE please please keep writing this one as it is so very much how I felt that book should have been written. You've got the humour and the great characters down pat but there's far more suspense and drama in this story!