Reviews for The Demon Design
miroku-has-darkness chapter 8 . 8/7/2007
awesome update soon
silberstreif chapter 8 . 7/10/2007
I really really hope that Artemis isn't blind... or at least isn't permanently blind. I mean he needs his eyes! But I liked the end. Next time he'll wait in the car *lol* I can't imagine what his parents would say if the saw him. ... But poor butler. He isn't a failure... it's just a bit much for ONE bodyguard to guard a boy against demons, humans, and all other things what lives... Butler go! You're a great bodyguard.
Mistress of the Knight chapter 2 . 7/2/2007
Can I just give a gentle reminder (okay, a nag) that you have at least one devoted fan of your other stories (sorry, don't know much about FMA). Every time I get an update I'm hoping against hope that it's Hobo Potter, Scone's Anyone? or, especially, The Demon Design. I really admire someone who can juggle so many ideas but please, oh please, don't drop one of these balls!
XxHuntressxX chapter 8 . 7/1/2007
update this fic now or suffer my rath!

i want to see what happened to poor arty!
misstee793 chapter 8 . 6/26/2007
*Squeals* Oh gosh, a cliffhanger, eh? Well, I guess I'll have to live with it DX I just hope you'll have mercy on me and update soon! :D I'll be waiting for the next chapter eagerly! :)
Wolfgirl13 chapter 8 . 6/12/2007
Hey! Don't even worry about it. Your version is MUCH better. So please don't forget and not update. I'd love to see what's happening next! So is Artemix really blind now? Please continue soon! Thanks very much!
XxXThe HuntressXxX chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
This fic is awesome! great write!
Miako chapter 8 . 4/30/2007
You know, I found myself thinking something similar when i was reading it. Great story so far, I can't wait for more.
knighted lioness chapter 8 . 4/29/2007
umm, im confused...is he actually blind, or is that what ALMOST happened? cus it'll be RELLI lame if he's blind...
Nips chapter 8 . 4/29/2007
Ohmigod! Artemis! It's like every Clamp manga I've ever read is happening again! There better be some serious fairy healage coming up. Liek, srsly. If they can reattach eyes... ugh... Just picturing the injuries is too much. Especially with Artemis. I love the way you write him. He's so in character, and you do a great job of building upon as well as reinforcing his personality. I look forward to the next chapter!
critic chapter 8 . 4/28/2007
Oh my god, please tell me there is some way to get Artemis's eyes back.
Mistress of the Knight chapter 8 . 4/28/2007
Oh yipee! You have not abandoned this story! I am indescribably glad! I hope it won't sound too creepy of me to say that in my mind you are now a better writer that Eowan Colfer (spelling? Can't be bothered to check!). I too was disappointed in the Lost Colony. PLEASE please please keep writing this one as it is so very much how I felt that book should have been written. You've got the humour and the great characters down pat but there's far more suspense and drama in this story!
HecatonchiresLM chapter 8 . 4/28/2007
Yeah, Lost Colony wasn't amazing. Your demons tho, those are damn scary.
SisterDear chapter 8 . 4/24/2007
Considering I haven't read the Lost Colony, I don't mind if it's AU at all. _

Oh, ouchies, Artemis. Nasty as this may sound, I really like the way you write/describe injuries. It's very blunt, I guess is the best word. The fact that you rarely describe the pain the injuries cause makes it all the more poignant.
sympatheticassassin chapter 8 . 4/24/2007
good to see you continuing the story. Artemis isn't blind is he?
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