Reviews for Checkmate
Sexysiren1981 chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
That was absolutely fantastic. I love lexana so this was a perfect story for me :) its a pity that smallville fans didnt review more,because this story ( in fact all your stories) deserve way more reviews! Please write some new lex and lana stories...holding my
Star-Lilac chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
Very nice Lexana oneshot! The game hess does remind me of Lex and Lana and the back and forth banter between them here was wonderful to read.
Copper's Mama chapter 1 . 9/19/2009
cute story
Sakura Hitsugaya chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
Brilliantly written. Chess lesson was well researched. Good job.
astrum-faith chapter 1 . 2/2/2009

This is cute and funny and wonderfully, adorably romantic all at once and I love it!

I especially liked the mention of liquorice. :)

How can this possibly be your first smallville fic? It's fantastic!

This is also... incredibly believable. I know how stupid that phrase sounds, since something is either 'believable' or isn't, but I had to include the emphasis because this is so brilliant! I can see them, the actual characters from the show, in this, and it works!

I'm going to check out your other stories.

Keep writing! You rock!
RedQu33n chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Well written and I loved the ending :) And it makes me wanna play chess *g*
The Creatress chapter 1 . 4/3/2008
I love this fic. This is amazing, and the last line was brilliant! Adding to faves...
Alydia Rackham chapter 1 . 4/1/2008
Ah! How captivating! What an excellently-written little moment, and how creative of you to draw parallels between chess and their relationship, and to show their revelations about each other as the game unfolded. Splendid ending, as well. And there are a couple lines that really caught me:"The double doors opened and standing there in all of his cunning and charm was Lex Luthor." and "She thought she was going to melt out of her chair and into a puddle on the floor." Brilliant imagery. I could see it. Well done.
Akimekura Amura chapter 1 . 10/16/2006
Tres adorable. Il est tres beaux. Mais, je ne parle pas Fran├žais bien...

Ich kann besser Deutsch sprechen, und ich denke du has gut geschrieben...

Multi-lingual review... I get so bored writing them in english... I like to spice it up a bit... Make it more interesting... And I'm tired so maybe my brain just feels like wandering...

Atoile chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
Wow, that was... perfect. I'm just sad it was over so soon. Both Lex and Lana seemed very in character, like Lex's explanations of the game. Oh, and the whole licorice thing was incredibly funny. I thought the whole story was very well written, and I'm putting this story on my favorites list.

Lastly, I want to say that that closing line 'The Queen had captured the King' was wonderful. I was like "oh...!"

And so, I offer my sincerist congradulations
Clarity Light chapter 1 . 2/3/2006
That was very cute, thank you. I'm pleased to find a convincing Lana/Lex story that seems like it could fit into the show. This was well written and had good narrative progression. Keep writing!
melodie568 chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
it was wonderfull and i loved it the ending was perfect ans i loved the descriptio of the queen. i know this is a one part story or a one shot but i realy hope you write more lana/lex stories emelodie :)
AzaliaKane chapter 1 . 11/15/2005
The best part was the description of the Queen's role. It was a great parallel to Lana.
RiverStyx1232 chapter 1 . 10/26/2005
Good job!
Anastasia Dreams chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
As a chess lover and Lex/Lana fan this story was perfect.
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