Reviews for Finding the Key
Deno chapter 41 . 10/10
It was truly a wonderful storry till the rape i really loved reading it up till then , im not beinf mean and u have every right to write anything u want, but that after making harry so powerful, u let him get aped by lowely death eaters, even with the unforgable he should have been able to do something, where did all his traning go? This is a flaw in ur plot, it was truly a wonderful storry but im stopping here
Anyway hats of to u for ur talanted writing till before the rape
Deno chapter 40 . 10/10
U made harry so powerful then explain to me how be got raped?
MADStar529 chapter 53 . 6/28
Amazing sequel.
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 53 . 6/25
This almost brought tears to my eyes! Just remembering of what these four best friends used to be and how life went for them always make me feel sad for Remus! But with that dropping line Severus gave I don't think he'll be alone for much longer! :'D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 52 . 6/25
Loved the chapter!
I did not see that ending coming! I sincerely hope the sequel has been completed! I really loved the story! The way you write, how you tell the story, and how the characters grew and developed and what they went through were the things that drew me into the first story and is what's keeping me throughout the sequel and will do for the next sequel! I am so glad to have found your stories and can only hope with all my heart that the ones uncompleted are someday completed! :'D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 51 . 6/25
Loved the chapter!
Love that Harry and Charlie had bonded with each other and I love the little glimpse we had of everyone's lives so far! And I love that Ginny has offered to carry their baby through the potion Severus made to conceive Harry! I am enjoying the mental images of little Harrys and Charlies running around! :'D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 50 . 6/25
Loved the chapter!
Love that Harry and Charlie will be adopting those two infants! I hope the people at the orphanage hasn't done anything to those babies!
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 49 . 6/25
Loved the chapter!
Love that Harry is healing nicely, and I love how the story didn't abruptly end the moment Harry killed Voldemort and how it didn't just wrap itself up in a few short paragraphs explaining what happened after the war! Really loving that the ending is taking it's time, that we are witnessing things being tied up and finished, and I am just loving it! :D

And that bit where Harry feels more natural in his Phoenix form than his human form is foreshadowing the ending to this story. I can already feel the tears! :'D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 48 . 6/25
Loved the chapter!
So glad Harry was reborn! I thought he was going to be in human form when this happened, but I loved it all the same! :D

So sad that Fawkes was once a wizard who outlived those he knew and opted to remain in his Animagus form. I hope that the last chapter to this story doesn't end with Harry seeing everyone die of old age and deciding to stay in his Animagus form! D':
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 47 . 6/25
Loved the chapter!
So sad, that many times Tom had the chance to go back and turn down a different path in life, but he didn't and ended up like this. I nearly cried when Harry told Voldemort about the girl and his son; it didn't help that I have the Spirited Away Ost 'Reprise' playing in my head throughtout the end of the last chapter and this chapter, that song fitted perfectly with this chapter! D':
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 46 . 6/25
Loved the chapter!
Love that Severus was able to kill those three, and I really loved how Hogwarts was helping in the fight! Love how everything on Hogwarts ground were doing their own parts in bringing down Death Eaters! No story that has the final battle has ever done this before, bravo! Really nice how the battle is so different and unique, I am really loving your style of writing!

And I can't believe Harry took the killing curse for Severus, but I'm not sad. I remember Harry telling them before he opened Potter Manor of his theory, that he had died that fateful night and had been reborn because of his Phoenix characteristics. I know that he will be reborn, and since he'll be reborn as a newborn infant I guess Severus will finally get his chance to see Harry growing up; even if it's at a fast rate! :D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 45 . 6/25
Loved the chapter!
Love that Harry and Charlie somewhat made up! I really love that Harry has started to feel hope that he might live after this war! And I love that the final battle hasn't been finished all in one chapter, love that it's taking so many chapters before it draws to an end! :D

And a random thought appeared in my head, what if Harry decides to take those two infants in and raise them with Charlie?! I can seriously see that happening when the war is over! Fingers crossed tightly that this happens! :D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 44 . 6/25
Loved the chapter!
The preparation for the battle has me both excited and dreading the final moment! So excited to see everyone beating down Death Eaters, yet dreading the deaths on the 'light' side that I know will happen! A strange mix of feelings that has vibrating! :D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 43 . 6/25
Loved the chapter!
The moment has finally arrived! I am glad that Severus and the wards had stopped Harry from completing the potion, otherwise his bond with Charlie and Severus would have been broken and never be allowed to reform! D:

And I am going to assume that there are horcruxes in this universe and that Harry will unintentionally destroy them when he destroys Voldemort magic. This seem to be happening a lot lately, but fingers are crossed that this happens! :D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 42 . 6/25
Loved the chapter!
So glad I'm reading this as the story is completed, lately all these chapters ended in somewhat cliffhangers, with this one hanging on for dear life; the wait would have killed me!

So glad the Flamells came to help Remus, I wonder how long that Elixir will make Remus better. Fingers crossed that it'll be a long time! :D

And I'm glad that Severus and Harry finally had that much needed talk, I can only hope things between them can be what they once were before the torture and rape.
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