Reviews for Finding the Key
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 39 . 6/24
Loved the chapter!
Love how the memorial went, much better than the memorials we have; I kind of wish all memorials were like this. :')

And I can't believe someone on Voldemort's side managed to sneak in and attempted to force the whole family to hear Percy's last moments! I hope they find who did it!
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 38 . 6/24
Loved the chapter!
Love how the lessons between Harry and the Slytherins went, and I love that a part of Harry accepts his love for Charlie and sees a future with him! I just hope they both survive! :D

And I love that Harry is able to take the magic away from a magical creature! Without magic, Voldemort will be as defenseless as a newborn baby; and I doubt Voldemort knows how to defend himself without magic like Harry can, so that'll be an easy win! A very unique and original way to have Harry kill Voldemort! :D

I did not see the death of Percy coming. I hope there wasn't a picture taken like there was one of Igor, I don't think the Weasleys will handle seeing a picture like that D':

And I am looking forward to Skeeter posting the information Harry is about to give her! I can just imagine the faces of those in Slytherin who are on Voldemort's side reacting to that article! :D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 37 . 6/24
Loved the chapter!
Love that Nott and some others came to Harry for dueling lessons, so excited to see their first lesson! :D

And I love how Harry handled the muggle-born infants case and that Angeline was involved, too. I wonder if they will come across a new guardian that will not treat one of the infants right. If there is one, fingers crossed that there's a scene of that; really curious to see how Harry and Angelina will handle that situation. :D

And I love the whole Riddle mystery, makes me curious if Voldemort really did miss a Riddle, or maybe it's the child of that girl Tom Senior had been with in Merope's memory! Maybe Tom Senior had gotten that girl pregnant and that was how Tarri (I hope that's what the woman said her name was) ended up with Riddle as her maiden name! :D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 36 . 6/23
Loved the chapter!
Love how Hermione is helping Harry, and I love what Severus had implied at the end, that the end is coming soon. At least, that's what I'm hoping he had implied! Fingers are being tightly crossed!

And even though I wish time in the story actually stopped so that Harry and Charlie can work this out, I love that the story hasn't stopped for them. Love that even though they are going through a huge hurdle in their relationship, so many things are still going on around them. This is what I love about your writing! :D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 35 . 6/23
Loved the chapter!
Loved the moment between Harry and Charlie! But I just want to jump into the story and shake Harry by his shoulders! Just when he was finally starting to admit what he was feeling for Charlie, he pushed the man away! I understand wanting to keep Charlie safe, but if someone on Voldemort's side finds out about what used to be between Harry and Charlie, Voldemort will still go after Charlie. No matter how long Harry forced himself away from Charlie. So either way, Charlie still be attacked if Voldemort somehow found out. I just wish Harry saw this for himself!

And even if Harry accepts the love he feels for Charlie and decided to stick with him, I doubt Harry will start shouting this for the world to hear. So, they go about this as they normally do, telling no one outside they trust about them. I could be looking at this differently, but I seriously can't see how Harry accepting the love for Charlie and not pushing him away will change how they keep their relationship a secret from the world.

Really hope Harry kills Voldemort at the end of this year, but with the way the story is going I doubt it. TT_TT
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 34 . 6/23
Loved the chapter!
Love that Percy was accepted into the family with no trouble, was a really happy moment, especially when Molly gave Severus the blanket she knitted for him! :D

And, yes! They finally found James's and Lily's portraits! I wonder if Severus and Harry will be staying in Potters manor from now on or if they will be staying in the cottage. Since the whole world thinks the Manor is nothing but ruins it would make sense for them to stay there. :)

Now that we know where Lily's and James's portraits were at, I wonder what was in the Black vaults that caught Severus's attention. :D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 33 . 6/23
Loved the chapter!
So glad Percy came to his senses, the family reunion actually brought tears to my eyes! :'D

And I love that Charlie gave Harry a bottomless coffee mug, I can see Harry constantly using that! :D

Fingers crossed that whatever Severus was shocked to see in the Black vaults are revealed in the next chapter! :D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 32 . 6/23
Loved the chapter!
Love that Harry has joined in on Ron's Occlumency lessons! Really hope Ron gets this down before Voldemort learns of his secret, fingers crossed that Ron shields will be powerful enough to stop Voldemort's intrusions.

Loved the inputs the staff had for Harry's, Hermione's and Draco's plans of making a school. With their help it would really help them in making this plan possible! :D

And I'm so excited! I can't help but think that the items Severus is so shocked to see in the Black vaults are portraits of James and Lily! I'm crossing my fingers so hard for this to be true! :D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 31 . 6/23
Loved the chapter!
A school for muggle-borns to attend and learn about the wizarding world before they go to Hogwarts is what I've always loved! I love it when this happens in stories, but it rarely does! So excited to see this planned out, fingers are crossed that we see this come to life in the story! :D

And Hermione was so close to getting Harry to talk about his feelings for Charlie. I really love how long Charlie is waiting for Harry, I just wish Harry would return those feelings! :'D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 30 . 6/23
Loved the chapter!
Loved that ending, a great way to end the chapter! ;D

And I loved that they placed a ward around Dudley's casket, it would have been horrible for his body to be used in rituals, the thought of it makes my stomach roll.

The potion Harry mentioned from the book was interesting, I wonder if that's the potion Voldemort wanted Severus to try on Harry.
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 29 . 6/22
Loved the chapter!
The thought that went through my head when Harry read the letter out loud was "That sick bastard." I am glad that Harry will be checking in on the new guardians of these orphan babies, neither of us want any of those children to go through what Harry and Tom went through growing up.

When the box was first mentioned, I was afraid that Voldemort had sent Harry decapitated heads of those infants' parents, that would have been terrible. I am looking forward to when Harry gets revenge on Voldemort for what he did that night!
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 28 . 6/22
Loved the chapter!
Love that Harry got to show them that he has perfected the transformation and that he used his Phoenix tears to heal Severus's arm! :D

Really wish Harry would stop blaming himself for everything! I just want to jump into the story and shake him by his shoulders! xD
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 27 . 6/22
Loved the chapter!
While I hate what the Dursleys had put Harry through, I'm glad that they were saved, for Harry's sake. I hope Harry will be okay when someone tells him what happened!

And I loved the bit between Severus and Lucius! I couldn't stop grinning! x'D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 26 . 6/22
Loved the chapter!
I was at the edge of my seat, was so worried that Draco was going to die or he was going to be so injured that rights to the head of Malfoy would have gone to his mother which would have been passed to Bellatrix and we all know what'll happen next! So glad that Harry was able to transform perfectly and use his phoenix tears to heal Draco! :D

Whoever pushed Draco will pay for what they did! I hope they are able to find out who did it!

And I loved how Harry got his revenge on Fudge, very clever! x'D
SpiderQueen Dez chapter 25 . 6/22
Loved the chapter!
Love that Harry and Dumbledore will be working to mend the bridge between them! And I love that Ollivander will be helping Harry with his wand problem! :D

I am looking forward to Severus putting Fudge in his place, if they all talk in private, which I know will happen! Fingers crossed! :D
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