I love how you hear Hatori and Ayame from Fruits Basket in the back!

Heh heh.. This story is really good so far!

And I'm chinese. Krad said "I love you" to Dark! D

So sweet of him!

Cool story, and shouldn't it be "yours truly," not "-yours truly-"? I'm sorry if I'm being a bit picky... it actually took a while to figure out what wo-ai-ni meant (which is pretty surprising considering that I understand the language fairly well), and how is it that Satoshi and Krad (let's just assume he didn't go to Satoshi for help) understand Chinese? Are they Chinese or did they just learn how to speak the language? If either Krad or Satoshi happen to be Chinese, consider changing their surnames (if at least their fathers are Chinese). I know for a fact that Hikari isn't a Chiense surname (unless you change it into its Chinese counterpart "Guang", which means "light", but the Hikari used in DNAngel actually means "Ice Hunter") and neither is Hiwatari.

yay!

0.o..its over already? wow, well, its really good, hope you make others this good_~

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG THIS IS A F*#&ING AWESOME STORY AND I LOVE THE DARKxKRAD AND THE UNBELIEVABLY CUTE SATOxDAI PAIRINGS! A JOB WELL DONE, MY HAT IS OFF TO YOUR FRIEND FOR WRITING IT, AND YOU FOR PUTTING IT ON THE SITE! THIS STORY HAS BEEN AWESOME!.

Yay! That was so awesome, my congratulations to your friend! It was amazing! Detailed and just wonderful! I hope she gets an account on here, I'd love to see more work from her!

Hey,

DEBS THE SNAPE FAN HERE. AUTHOR OF SEPERATED TWINS MY LIFE BROTHERS LOVE AND MANY MORE.

i just want to tell you that I am back up and running! thanks for listening, link below and goodbye.

You have read one of my story at one point or another

updated, but they're all so shor5t, anyway, update soon_~

wow...awesome

YAY! KRAD'S BACK!_

...EVIL!

Get the next oen up...i wanna see the end...

i dont wanna work on my DNAngel fic till i get more reviews on the new chjapter so i need soemthing to read now go go go!

oh awesome fic by the way.

laters

That's it Kyou we're taking tori tori out! She is going down. The party of me that loves her says no but the author side says do it! I love tori tori to pieces but damn that5's not fair!

Glad to know people like my story, hehe never thought it would be this popular, thats Kyon for posting it.

Aw...come on! That's too short for a chapter!

And you are keeping me in suspense! Hurry up and update!