|Reviews for I Shall Wait|
| amsev chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
Very powerful. Well done - great take on Madame Hooch -
I'm glad you're using "Xiomara" as her first name. I'm not entirely sure where that originated. I do know that the trading cards list her first name as "Rolanda", which, to me, seems like a terribly boring name for someone so colorful - ever since I read the 1st HP book, I've been a bit peeved with JK that she didn't expand on that character more.
Also, nice little twist with ol' Voldie getting a hold of that note and dangling it in front of Severus' nose.
| Fin Ravel chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Whoa, that was deep. I like this a lot, especially how it ties in to your other story (which was excellent, by the way!) and how it conveys the emotions of other people while rarely leaving the viewpoint character without being melodramatic.
| duj chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
Lucky she learned her lessons well. Lucky her teacher was a man of unflinching determination and unbreakable integrity.
| Possum132 chapter 1 . 9/14/2005
Good stuff, very convincing.