|Reviews for Metal Gear Solid 4: Snake Ends
| Insomnia Owl chapter 1 . 10/5/2005
You did a good job writing the characters, but the format is less desirable; it is obvious that you have the talent to write the story other than in a "text/script dump" format. Most importantly, however, is the chapter should be divided into other chapters, but otherwise I liked it, no one ever seemed out of character in their dialogue.