Reviews for Velvet Raindrops
Caoimhe Rose chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
Aww. I absolutely love your interpretation of how Martin and Diana would be if Martin were to be sick. 3
PrettyPrincessxo chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
omfg i love it (L)
toppie chapter 1 . 5/6/2009
cute story though I don't see the romance in the fic. it should be labeled as family.

if you want to label it as romance, you could have added something on the last part...

"Thanks. I owe you a lot..."

"No you don't. I'm your sister; this is what I do. I love you...night."

"Night..." I love you too. he thought

like that!

anyway! your a good writer! great job!
Maped13 chapter 1 . 2/5/2009
Cute story! But.. I don't see the romance...
Spidey meets Wizard-Theif chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
Aw. Awesome job!

DianaLombard1996 chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Very romance!Good try!
Diana Mystery chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
It was an excellent piece, barring the fact that you kept forgetting simple words such as "the", "and", "with", etc.

I also fail to comprehend why you would label it "Romance" when there was no romance involved.

There's a lot of maturity in the writing style. Despite the rating, I think it would do well if you posted it at Adult Fan Fiction. Net.
King of Werewolves chapter 1 . 10/21/2006
This touched me a little. I hate getting sick too, so I can relate to Martin. Please do more!
PurpleSkillz chapter 1 . 10/13/2006
Hey this is very good i love it and Diana/Martin fics are so cute :) :P
RedLion2 chapter 1 . 8/24/2006
Loved it. I really think that Di and Martin are great as sister and brother, although I have to admit, I like seeing them as more, too. Di is so caring and Martin does really appreciate her. It's why he goes to such great lenghts during their missions to keep her safe...

caithzadz chapter 1 . 8/22/2006
aww... really cute! shme their step-siblings
Sweatshirt Shiro chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
How SWET! I hope you write an epilouge!
ZombiesForNarnia chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
aw! I loved it! It was cute!
Kildiazar the Unwanted Ghost chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Quite untrue, Martin does get sick in the series. Twice if I'm not mistaken.

Anyway, not so much angst in this one. Really nice though. ;)
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