Very well written! Cool idea, that he has that rule because he's actually never kissed nobody. Great that River insists. The poetic beginning was really helpful to explain her actions in chapter 1. Thanks for sharing!

This was great fun to read. I do believe this is the first fic I've found that's written Jayne as Never Been Kissed and that's just adorable and I love it.

sexy beautiful

The ending to this was perfect! Her weird innocence blurting out that Jayne is a good kisser and him proudly beaming at her. Loved it.

That was an adorable ending for such a steamy fic. :3 so sweet and oddly fitting.

Rix

Loved the poem at the beginning. Haunting and beautiful. Jayne was very in character and the sexual chemistry was conveyed very well.

love it!

My my...you really know how to turn a phrase when it comes to convey hot and heavy without going into too much detail over the mechanics of the process, KateShines. Awesome work!

Huh...leave it to Jayne to snark at someone, even after he's finished sexing them silly! But he'll come around, I think ;D

That was amazing. You did such a good job, your descriptions and the emotions you conjured matched the elemental nature of them. And graphic is totally okay! Loved it!

This story is fantastic! I don't often like poetry, but that piece at the beginning was so potent and powerful. This is going on my favorites for sure!

Aw this was so hot and so sweet and grand! Thanks for sharing!

Wow, I thought I'd read every Rayne fic out there and then I stumbled onto this. This was H-O-T!

Very nice, very sexy and just Wow.

Very yummy! Lucky River! Though to tell you the truth, I don't think that it would matter much to Jayne if she was legal or not.

Awesome chapter keep up the good worka and update soon!