Reviews for Better Late
HextheDaydreamer chapter 1 . 11/21
That was both really sweet and sad in the same breath. Well done!
ChamaeleonEyes chapter 1 . 9/3
Wow, you've achieved perfect elegance - the (seeming) simplicity of the easy-going build-up makes the story extremely enjoyable and easy to read, and you top it off with a emotional blow to the heart.
Top notch short story!

P.S.: I love the excuses he makes, they're hilarious!
jj chapter 1 . 8/8
that ending... straight to the heart
TXJ chapter 1 . 8/3
Well played, I can actually picture this happening.
TheHaloFreak chapter 1 . 5/25
This is maybe the first thing I've ever read that I feel truly...erm does Kakashi right, and by that I mean gets his thoughts right because I've read things where I would consider him in character they just weren't from his POV. He's kind of an oddly complex character and I feel like I don't completely understand him myself(I'm only up to episode 100 of shippuden but I've read a few spoiler type things on the Internet and know the gist of his past) anyway I love Kakashi and I love the way you wrote him.
Also the "I found a string" excuse might be my favorite, although "I realized my hair is grey" was hilarious too :D
LittleWesties9 chapter 1 . 5/16
Is funny but quite sad at the same time, good job with this fanfic!
Salome Maranya chapter 1 . 4/26
Humor with a sucker punch at the end.
Ugh, so much feels for Kakashi...
The Flaming Darkness chapter 1 . 4/25
god you evil person that was surprisingly sad
long live marshmallows chapter 1 . 4/11
Oooohhh this is very nice! I especially like the last two lines.
Mouse-size-Dragon chapter 1 . 2/14
Wow, that was a perfect beginning to Kakashi's habits.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
Oh that last line ;-;
SilverRider09 chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
nora9gina chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Funny, but sad. I like it.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
This is awesome. Pure awesome.
Midas-Gold chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
That was so simply beautiful, i was totally engrossed i love this! you're a remarkably amazing writer and i want mooooooree
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