Reviews for Better Late
Amberu J.-san chapter 1 . 10/28/2005
This one about Kakashi being late is relly funny who would have thout that he could come up with so many exsuse for being late in the frish place even Naruto and team7 would't belive it if they read it so keep it plece and let see what the rest cast habits are
GoldenRat chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
Great fic! A very good reason for Kakashi's perpetual lateness.
RandomTopic chapter 1 . 10/15/2005

i don't know what to say. The ending was heart warming(or heartbreaking or something inbetween) and the excuses were funny. Yeah. That's what I have to say. I liked it, I guess.
kakashidiot chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
Hm... my favorite part was the excuse 'I realized my hair was grey.'


So funny - but with slight angst which gives it a well-rounded feel. And the fact that you made it hard for him to be late is a very interesting idea which I am not sure has been explored before.
Turin resurrected chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
“Here’s your mission. I’m reporting you, as well.”


Considering that his job is THE job hazard itself, Kakashi carries on pretty well. Great piece of writing!
bite the hand that feeds chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
Absolutely gorgeous! I can't think of much constructive to say; I loved the various excuses, the sense of slow defining of Kakashi's persona, the reactions of the chuunin were just too much fun! The bittersweetness of the end though, really grounded it for me!

(I'm dragon_bite on LJ, btw)
fukkafyla chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
that was a really enjoyable read. I feel it fits well in with canon.
KaitouKudou chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
hey, that's a pretty good ending. I liked it alot

PS: Check out my fic too
SeaGoatsUnite chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
Good one. I really liked your excuses. Well done. :)
Crystalazer chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
He found a piece of string?

...That's a good one. _
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