Reviews for Better Late
Tlgrimn chapter 1 . 6/4/2016
My poor poor heart.
FatigueMakesMeTired chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
Oh. My. Gosh. I cried for that last line and also when you said that people aren't noticing how well he was at fake smiling. Kakashi is my favorite character and I really love him. Thank you for such a wonderful one shot.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2016
I died.
Thanks a lot
Very good though
marisme-ice chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
That...that just crack my heart...
SpiritoftheOrchidFlower chapter 1 . 3/14/2016
This is killing me. This probably wont be the last time I read this.
Burnehn chapter 1 . 2/24/2016
I love this and yet... it makes me feel so... cracked... T_T
HextheDaydreamer chapter 1 . 11/21/2015
That was both really sweet and sad in the same breath. Well done!
ChamaeleonEyes chapter 1 . 9/3/2015
Wow, you've achieved perfect elegance - the (seeming) simplicity of the easy-going build-up makes the story extremely enjoyable and easy to read, and you top it off with a emotional blow to the heart.
Top notch short story!

P.S.: I love the excuses he makes, they're hilarious!
jj chapter 1 . 8/8/2015
that ending... straight to the heart
TXJ chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
Well played, I can actually picture this happening.
TheHaloFreak chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
This is maybe the first thing I've ever read that I feel truly...erm does Kakashi right, and by that I mean gets his thoughts right because I've read things where I would consider him in character they just weren't from his POV. He's kind of an oddly complex character and I feel like I don't completely understand him myself(I'm only up to episode 100 of shippuden but I've read a few spoiler type things on the Internet and know the gist of his past) anyway I love Kakashi and I love the way you wrote him.
Also the "I found a string" excuse might be my favorite, although "I realized my hair is grey" was hilarious too :D
LittleWesties9 chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
Is funny but quite sad at the same time, good job with this fanfic!
Salome Maranya chapter 1 . 4/26/2015
Humor with a sucker punch at the end.
Ugh, so much feels for Kakashi...
thesmollbean chapter 1 . 4/25/2015
god you evil person that was surprisingly sad
longlivemarshmallows chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
Oooohhh this is very nice! I especially like the last two lines.
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