|Reviews for Get the Phone|
| willcryptograham chapter 3 . 5/28/2014
This literally could have worked as an actual episode holy god. If you somehow get this, please finish it holy shit. Love it love it love it.
| thewerepuppy chapter 3 . 6/24/2011
I know it's been, like, 6 years since you wrote this, but I just wanted to drop buy and say how much I loved it. It's one of the VERY few fanfictions I've read of any show that actually does read like an actual episode. Thanks for sharing it, and happy writing!
| Deydria chapter 3 . 3/9/2011
it's been a long time since an update, i wish you would continue ;_;
| TheYummyPencil chapter 3 . 1/20/2010
Oh gawd, I just realised how late I am to the review party! I’m sorry about that :-( But hey, at least I got here! And I brought snacks! Now onto our review...
Dude, that was AWESOME! I love me some Aaron and Mahandra and I can totally see them all knocked up! Please, please, PLEASE let there be a continuation of this! I'm really intrigued as to why the muses kept Jaye from telling (and really worried about Mahandra drinking beer, I must confess) the truth...
P.S: Brass monkey is my favourite :-)
| TheYummyPencil chapter 2 . 1/20/2010
Aw, I love how close Aaron/Mahandra/Jaye are! They’re so close they take pregnancy tests together :D Am I supposed to want them to have lots of part black, part white, part Native American babies together? Because I do!
Great chapter :-)
| TheYummyPencil chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
Squee! I just completed the first and last season of 'Wonderfalls' on YouTube and all I wanted was a little fanfiction to help ease my pain :-( Well, I found a little (VERY little) and most of it is just...blah.
But THIS is a breath of fresh air! It's funny, smart, in character, and features my two favourite couples (the ONLY major couples on the show but whatever)! Besides a few punctuation errors, it's pretty much perfect! Looking forward to the next...
| vesperlynds chapter 3 . 7/8/2008
great story.I love it.
| idjunkie chapter 3 . 4/25/2008
I know that you completed this story but you should totally write another Aaron/Mahandra story. I found the story as charming as the characters. Great dialogue and the bantering between the three were really in character.
| T Parke-Laine chapter 3 . 3/28/2008
Aw, this was great. Usually when people post fic in script form it's a hot mess, but it really works here. I think you captured the characters and the tone of the show perfectly.
| Dina C chapter 3 . 3/18/2007
This is well done and adorable. I love the Aaron and Mahandra relationship, so I particularly enjoyed this story. Good work!
| Flash Foreward chapter 3 . 12/23/2006
Lol, I love it! It's really funny, really in character, and just great.
Not sure how I feel about reading it in screenplay format... but that's just me.
| LMiC2001 chapter 3 . 6/5/2006
this is too cute. I like it a lot.
| RBSIII chapter 3 . 5/19/2006
I wonder how this adventure affected Jaye and Eric's plans for the next evening?
| BatteredChild chapter 3 . 4/12/2006
I liked it, good job.
| mouse209 chapter 3 . 12/14/2005
Better late than never to leave a review. The characters dialog is dead-on accurate. Clean running, no fillers, zero redundant lines. Chapter 3, scene INT. JAYE’S TRAILER “LIVINGROOM”, line 153 to 185, first pass I got a tad lost in the crosstalk. I thought there was going to be a freaky plot twist (eluding a “T” rating). Re-reading it a couple times made sense. Line consolidation would help reading-ease, nevertheless it’ll works wonderful on the big screen. Thumbs-up!