Reviews for Pickup Lines
MaxximumRide666 chapter 1 . 4/2/2009
LOL! You are awesome! Totally didn't get where it was going until the end! And i absolutely LOVED it! Only Lane/Paris fanfic on here (which is depressing) but yours is still amazing!

You totally have the characters down! I could actually picture them the whole time!

Brilliant!
Riana1 chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
I love your POV changes- I can hear the silences as much as the spoken words.
Miguel51 chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
that was frickin confusing, but also fricking hilarious!
Pixie Child chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
I'm in agreement with the first reviewer. Only not. That was very goo. What the hell, only because at frist it was hard to follow. But I loved it. *dances around* GG femslash that's not Paris/Rory. _Good_ GG femslash that's not Paris/Rory. There's no wrong.
pu chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
ok after reading that story i have one question...WHAT HELL WAS THAT?