Reviews for On the Ramparts
Danny Barefoot chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
Well, you're finally back! And Sunny gets to do something after her first story ends, instead of everything and nothing.

I think a description of working religious feeling was something the fandom needed. Sunny speaks older but she's still got the same quality. I'm not sure about the telephone conversations, there's plenty already that shows ordinary life going on around Sonya. Maybe they show something about Peter.

Nice that the condition of the Dead has improved since TAS. Letterheadings show how far L-world has come as well. You've definately got two sides of the rememberance day feeling.