Reviews for More than a Feeling
guest chapter 24 . 6/9/2014
. Sometimes one find an author that uses a work we all read and makes of it something completly original. You used JKR's books to set the universe but that's it. Sharp writing, no useless descriptions or details, OCs more interesting that most well-known characters and a clever plot. Great job!
I really enjoyed reading this.
Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 24 . 7/9/2012
its sad lily and james have to die expecially when eris just starts being friends with them. but i hate tom for putting that spell on lily. ugh sirius is so stupid i get that he is protective of his friends but he should actually know what he is saying before accusing someone of that. i like jugson hes funny well i dont like him but what he says is funny. wooo! i was so into this story that it only took me a day and a half to read it. i ended up staying up all night and passed out at noon with only 4 chapters left and i finally finished it!
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 23 . 7/8/2012
i dont like tom and whatever that thing is he did to lily and the other girl from before. oh my fuck who crucioed her!
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 22 . 7/8/2012
what a hot and horrifying dream. no one wants to now about dumbledore and minerva making out its like knowing you parents or grandparents are making out. ew! sirius you moron get the werewolf away from the humans you know how much remus would hate him self if something happened! oh shit he find out damn is he gonna be pissed!
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 21 . 7/8/2012
poor peter i might hate him but i feel bad they just ignore him and when they do talk to him they are kind of mean to him. also feel bad for eileen if only she would leave her husband and take sev with her. to bad eris isnt dani's sister instead of cousin her life would be slightly easier. so james and lily are together now looks lie eris' advice helped alot! oh god i cant believe she goes! hes going to be pissed!
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 19 . 7/8/2012
james is rather adorable its so sad he dies
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 18 . 7/8/2012
oh haha she thought it was funny lets just act like my last review never happened! i still think bellatrix is a creeper! so she doesnt agree with voldemort? is she just going to be neutral during the first war or will she help the light? oh god bellas baby talk is so damn annoying! wow that is some interesting stuff eris and narcissa had. haha only narcissa would daydream about that! voldemort is so creepy and in the last movie he was even creepier when he hugged draco and did his weird laugh. i was dissapointed they never gave him red eyes or harry green eyes i mean we have colored contacts for a reason! also sorry if you just read that and havent seen the last movie it doesnt give away anything just the fact that voldemort is a creeper. its weird how you are calling the death eaters the knights of walpurgis i know they were called that before but i always assumed that voldemort only called them that when he was in school as tom and it was easier calling them that then death eaters and after he left i assumed he just called them death eaters like i never thought that sev and the others knew they could have been called the kights of walpurgis instead of death eaters. i wonder when or if eris will ever know remus being a werewolf isnt her fault. and when/if she does i wonder what she will do after she finds out she didnt cause it since she kind of has a friendship with him sort of same as james. is it just me or am i the only one who thought he looked slightly normal before he attacked the potters and had to do that ritual/potion to bring himself back? like he still had hair but had red eyes oh and a nose and all the other evilness villians have but still looks slighty normal just evil? does that even make sense? oh sev i wish you didnt do this it would make life so much easier and the potters probably wouldnt have died. the whole sword thing i never pictured voldemort doing it seems to muggleish is the word i think didnt we do that in old times for knights and whatever? ah so the inner circle are death eaters while the lower ones are the knights of walpurgis? is that right? oh sev i really wish he didnt do this but i guess it needs to happen. wow i feel like this is one log ass review! love this!
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 17 . 7/8/2012
oh sev when everything was going so well you have to go and say that and with a malfoy drawl also
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 16 . 7/8/2012
aw how cute at the end! i like the hufflepuff tendencies they have makes it more interesting!
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 15 . 7/8/2012
poor girl blaming herself for remus being a werewolf i wonder when or if she ever finds out it wasnt her fault. uh the blacks are poor? oh bellatrix is such a creeper! i like how she sort of talks/shows stuff to sev in her thoughts sometimes.
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 11 . 7/8/2012
who wouldnt like to be yours sev? love this! sirius/padfoot needs to stop chasing eris/elpis she is only trying to help
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 10 . 7/8/2012
why is it that when a person walks in on someone kissing they have to say something instead of just walking away like they didnt see anything
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 9 . 7/8/2012
haha i find kettleburn hilarious! its so funny how he does that with the points! for some reason when i picture his class i picture the crocodile hunter steve erwin or something along those lines. hes like that ghost professor but funnier! oh my god i think i am in love with kettleburn hes sooo funny! i like how eris is friendly with remus.
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 8 . 7/8/2012
love what she did to sevs room i wonder what he thought when he saw it. hm lucius i wonder how eris and him will be like
XxBlindXxAngelXx chapter 7 . 7/7/2012
so she became an animagus to help remus? odd but sweet. i wish she had attacked peter/wormtail
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