Reviews for Shadow of Kyuubi
Lucio BetaBlake chapter 4 . 12/29/2013
Im dissapoited in the lack of updates. This fanfic is AMAZING! I have never seen this idea put into such detail and such. I LOVE IT!
onepiecefannumber1 chapter 4 . 9/21/2013
update when u get a chance
Trying -Helps chapter 2 . 12/28/2012
Kinda a recycled plot line but it seems to be going good. One thing I would not do is answer reviews on the actual story. I did like your whole "Haku is actually dead though" so many plots have him still alive which is fine but it usually is ruined. Anyway I would probably make sure Sakura doesn't get to fan girlish, even she has to have some limit, well maybe. Anyway Good work, good writing, and a interesting plot.
imafighta chapter 4 . 7/20/2012
finish now.
LuckyTurtle chapter 4 . 9/6/2011
Naruto's afraid of forgetting his ideals, right? So I think you should put something in there about how Naruto is using the senbon needles as a way of reminding himself to never forget Haku and Haku's/his ideals :) Just a thought!

I REALLY like where this is going, so I REALLY hope you update (soon)!
Ppsh chapter 2 . 4/30/2011
Not that it matters much, since this was last updated 5 years ago and has clearly been abandoned, but this is a really disappointing chapter. It was well written up till this point, but 'Divine intervention' is a cliche that immediately disinclines me to continue reading. It's like the authors all-in-one plot device for spurting forth whatever nonsense they like, with no justification, and is just incredibly distasteful and unimaginative. And there's the fact that when you posit sentient, overseeing Gods in a story, the protagonist becomes little more than a puppet, as do all the other characters. Everything becomes immediately and unjustifiably arbitrary. You destroy any credibility. As I said, very disappointing.
rajvir chapter 4 . 1/14/2011
I like this story but when are you going to update it
missymoo11 chapter 4 . 11/22/2010
love it!
DangoDaikazaku chapter 4 . 8/23/2010
What the hell! UPDATE! I WANNA READ MOOOOORRRRREE!

IT WAS SOOO GOOD TOO!
night wind98 chapter 4 . 8/15/2010
whens the next one
OtherwiseTheDarkness chapter 4 . 6/30/2010
oh why oh why have you never updated this since chapter 4? It's really really good! i don't know if you even log in anymore or what but really - this is a really interesting fic. i would be so happy if you updated, i want to see where it goes! C:
bloody raptor chapter 4 . 5/13/2010
interesting
shadowedstalker-princess chapter 1 . 3/27/2010
WOW! This is totally awesome keep it up!
kyuubi-m chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
really good fanfic so far
Illadaran chapter 4 . 12/16/2009
your not very good at keeping promises are you.
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