Reviews for Cold
caffeineaddict13 chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
i think your a really fantastic writer. and i've read most of your pieces, (the only reason i havent read them all is because i havent gotten to it yet) and i have cried at some of them. this one made me smile. i actually downloaded that song before i read it; just to make sure i got the full effect. incredible. i dont know how but the words of the story somehow match the song perfectly, and even though it is meant to be a sad piece, i found if more bittersweet. it was really great, thanks.
OrangePunk chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
so sad!
recycled plots chapter 1 . 1/26/2006
i apologize if you get two requests from me. my computer's being crazy. if you still have the song, will you please email it to me?
Jessobsessed09 chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
wow...pretty powerfully sad...oh man. That part when he says "if only because she is stronger than him"
london75 chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
I it good, keep on writing!
JennaBanana chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
Wow. That's so good, but so sad! I was almost crying (
Hallon chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
Ah, this was so sad, but still hopeful at the end. Great work!
GQSecondAct chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
well, this tangent has definitely been explored before, but i really liked how you did this. it wasn't too overdone, it was a good length, it was beautifully written...ah. this was really wonderful.

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Outside, there are two mirror images of her and they are laughing as the snow gets caught in their hair, their eyelashes. There is a strange feeling in his face. The feeling of the corners of his mouth trying to pull upward. He relents and smiles softly against the glass of the window.

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that was so bittersweet. i loved how you portrayed jess - it really was HIM, and not a sappy sack of feelings that he is often portrayed as when someone he loves dies.

you handled this beautifully. write more, becuase you obviously have a knack for this.

amazing job.

-molly-