Reviews for Burning fire
Miko Vampire chapter 8 . 11/19/2013
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Starshower chapter 8 . 1/11/2012
I thought this was complete?
Demise Angel chapter 8 . 12/17/2010
Awwwwwww, it was sooo good. Duos pov was awesome. Great details again. Why stop? Lol. You haunt even wrote any smex yet. You really did a lot of good quotes in actually all your stories. Even the emotions and feelings described are realistic. Even if not gun dam wing. I hope you keep writing. I'm a 2x1 fan by the way. Loves you. Lol
Demise Angel chapter 3 . 12/17/2010
'My ass is an exit, not an entrance!. Loved that. Wow. I've read stories as heero being a pain in the ass lover. But this story is truly targeting the ride. So gonna be my favorite even if this is discontinued. Great writing. Loved the scenery details. I also wonder what duo's father is hiding. Hmmm...lol.
h to the iso chapter 8 . 9/21/2009
are you going to continue? Enjoyed it very much, like the relationship that Heero and Duo have and the way it is progressing! Update soon!
schenlark chapter 8 . 5/8/2009
another story discontinued... *sigh-*
oOboredOo chapter 8 . 2/24/2009
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AmoraPyra chapter 8 . 10/24/2008
this story is really good. why is it discontituned? i would love to read more. i love how you made heero. i just wanted you to know that i enjoyed this story.
RunningOnCoffee chapter 8 . 6/23/2008
dude is dis da end?

if it ain't then u should write more, it so good.

i love ur story.

can't wait 2 see wat happens.
Owule chapter 8 . 5/30/2008
Please update soon! I love this story!

love ya-Scythe
larken chapter 8 . 3/25/2008
hey, is this done?
Owule chapter 8 . 2/2/2008
Please, I need more of this, I'm adicted!
noir chapter 8 . 1/10/2008
more please!

I really want duo and heero to get together really bad but duo is being such an ass but it's kinda cute too...*smile* please write more soon!
Angel T-chan Nekoi chapter 8 . 10/17/2007
Ooh, the story is so good! Hope that Hee-chan and Duo can get to each other quicky, seems that Duo's father will not restrain himself into doing somethind nasty to Duo, and Duo'll need all the help he can get. Also, Duo needs the lesson of humanity, he needs to learn that slaves are people too, they need respect. If it's not too much to ask, could you continue this story? Please?
Barbara chapter 8 . 9/10/2007
Hi!

Its me again. Now that I have finished all the chapters I can make an educated comment. YOU HAVE POTENTAL! Just have to work on your spelling, grammer, punctuation, etc.

Noticed that a lot of your spelling mistakes are typographical. That means you are not going over your story and checking for mistakes of any kind. If you want truly glowing comments on your stories, make the extra effort to reread your chapter before posting it. Look forward to the contiuation of this story.

Ciao!
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