Reviews for Breathing for Two
LukeAndLorelai Brucas Fan chapter 1 . 2/17/2009
That was so sad and so beautiful. Great name. Totatllt Summer's daughter, "Mommy would've let me get icecream." So nice.
11nivea342 chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
:( heartbreaking
FebruaryNight chapter 1 . 7/29/2007
sad yet strangly adorable plus you get extra props cause my name is ariel

loved it

keep writing

adf41254 chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
that was really good! it was sad and you could feel the pain... well written
kait chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
wow. that was amazing,no lie.

and your summary was so great and well-written

Tricia dSC chapter 1 . 12/23/2005
omg. I didn't know i could cry *that* easily. damn you. jp. that was fantastically angsty. oy.


great job!
xfalloutgirlx chapter 1 . 11/1/2005
omg your killin me here. in a good way i guess. its a really good story. i loved it honestly even though i usually dont read things like this. good job.
Dogsbody chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
You've just broken my heart!
polar-ice-cubes chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
aw so sad bubt seth can't die he has ariel to take care of. but a prequel might be pretty good
dodgeviper chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
that was soo sad. but well written. look forward to reading more of your writing.
jumper chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
dude my heart breaks!
Kat chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
that was deep
caroliscool chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
That was beautifully written! You should write a prequel about S/S's happy times before she died!
RA4Evah chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
Omg! it was so sad, i even cried.. Write more stuff, but try to make them happy? it was nice writtend..
valkrys chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
Amazing... really sad but amazing! Loved every word of it!

I don't know where you could take this from here, but I sure would love to read more!
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