Reviews for Dance of the Skeletons
Apples 'n' PB chapter 44 . 8/3/2019
I ship jinx and kid flash but she and cyborg are such a good couple in this fic, I love them
Apples 'n' PB chapter 7 . 7/25/2019
Wow, Richard is kind of a jerk! It makes sense, though, that he would need to grow a bit before becoming the leader the team deserves
Apples 'n' PB chapter 6 . 7/24/2019
I wish I read this story sooner! The Titans as high school kids becoming vigilantes is so cute. Most importantly, I love the various relationship dynamics between the core five. So far so good.
misfit.masterpiece chapter 26 . 3/31/2019
“She hadn’t said a word for half an hour (eight minutes into the game).”
I found this way funnier than I should have. Love the story!
misfit.masterpiece chapter 47 . 11/21/2018
In regards to your space key (don’t freak out!), I thought it was part of your artistic license. Like when they asked Gar how he was after the K. I. S. S. with Rachel. When his words blurred together, I thought he was just talking fast (which I can imagine him doing)
misfit.masterpiece chapter 37 . 11/15/2018
I’ve read this story many, many times. I don’t think I’ve ever commented on Babs and Selina in this chapter, but I am HERE for their friendship 3
e.c.a.broman chapter 1 . 10/28/2018
This is one of my favourite fanfics, and I couldn’t tell you how many times I’ve read it. The idea is so good, and it’s so engaging.
I wish you were still writing, I would love to discuss this story, I have so many thoughts and questionsI might have read it a few too many times now because I spend twice as much of my time researching and trying to improve it as I do actually reading. That is not to say I think I could do better, I’ve been trying for years to get my story together, but that Dance of the Skeletons inspires me. Thank you! If you still get and read these reviews i just wanted you to know how much your writing means to me
Aisha Kaltinera chapter 1 . 5/23/2018
You know, I've always remembered this first chapter. This was, and still is, one of my favorite Teen Titans fic. I'm doing a re-read right now, but commenting on the first chapter felt like the best thing. There's something about this introduction that is just memorable and feels so natural. Sometimes intros, especially to AUs, can feel really awkward and forced, as the author tries to convey relevant information. But this isn't it at all. The character of Mr. Evans really does manage to coerce the information out of them in a natural way. I also really like the backstories given out in the first chapters. I'll probably leave more reviews as I go on.
misfit.masterpiece chapter 1 . 5/18/2018
“I like you, Jinx. Anything that makes you look that good is just a bonus.” That is some smooooooth writing, my dude
Tsiyi sin chapter 64 . 2/5/2018
So at first I thought, what was the purpose of creating a AU if you were just going to recreate the show but without powers but i gotta say it was WORTH reading through it. Love the writing, I dont think I have read a fanfic as clever as yours. You realy went in and gave it your all since every chapter was well writen( More impressive when you take it to account that it was 64 chapter long)

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Probaly my only problem with this is the ending. I felt like it was underwelming. I figure it would be this big event but it just ended with this little squable.

other then that I would give this a 9/10 . A must read if you want to get into a GOOD action, drama , romance, comedy fanfic.
misfit.masterpiece chapter 17 . 12/3/2017
This story was the first I remember reading on this website. Now, years later, I reread it to find out that yes, it was as good as I remember.
I never really considered CyJinx. After reading these last few chapters, I feel like I can definitely tolerate them. (I’m not gonna say I approve, seeing how Flinx is an all time favorite ship, but hot damn)
Nobody'seaweedbrain chapter 64 . 9/11/2017
I read the entire story on fanfiction app (unfortunately, the reason why you're 63 reviews short, but it was convenient especially with data costs these days.) And I absolutely loved the story.
Your Author's notes were interesting. Surprising really and most of the time felt like a direct insult. LOL. I didn't check your reviews for flamers but maybe you got a lot of those. Further into the story authors notes got sweeter and I realized I missed the edge of the earlier ones. Weird, right?

Anyways. Every characters perspective and back story and giving everyone faults and strengths. This was remarkable story telling. And I'm sad the story has come to an end. (Relieved aswell, 333K words is no easy feat!)
You tied up all the loose ends and I'm especially glad that at the end Trigon had a moment of good guardian. I would have hated for Raven or her mum to kill him. And that he protected her in a Trigon way, hard knockout, painful but totally right... and aaah everything. It was awesome and trying to tell you how great just makes me sound stupid.
Soooo... GOOD WORK :D
IamAmazing326 chapter 1 . 8/26/2017
I love the story so far!
IamAmazing326 chapter 7 . 8/26/2017
I love the story so far!
CowboyCrusader chapter 5 . 3/19/2017
I'm sorry, i tried, I really did but i don't understand the point of doing an AU if they're just going to become vigilantes anyway. not to mention how ridiculous some of the characters were. Your typical teenagers talk like grown adults and are amazing badasses with ludicrous backstories. Whats the point of a high school A.U. if you're going to to strangle any suspension of disbelief anyway? Good prose but that doesn't save this weird fic. But that's just my opinion and clearly I'm in the minority.
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