Reviews for Unglued
artisanrox chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
I love how you did the whole taking-out-Kagura's-heart thing. It was awful, and terrifyingly described.
Brokensword chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
This was engrossing from the very first line. I especially like the line about yelling inhuman things. All in all a very interesting take on things.
MiniFruitbat chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
I like this. The words are very poignant, and the characters seem quite realistic. There are some awkward points in the text that could probably be fixed in subsequent revisions, but overall, it's quite good.
wellduh chapter 1 . 10/11/2005
Wow. I always love these things about Kagura, and Kanna. Those two fascinate me.
hana-ginkawa chapter 1 . 9/27/2005
I find that I don't think much about the other characters. . . I like this. A lot. Awesome piece of work! I try, but I can never hold a candle to the works of my predecessors in fanfiction. . . Thanks for sharing.
Serpent at Sunset chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
Hmm, very interesting. I like when Sesshoumaru told her off. Kagura is a bit immature, isn't she? And she does contol the wind like Naraku controls her. I thought I was the only one who considered that. Another masterpiece of a fic!
unheard screams chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
another wonderful work. why would kanna think there was a change in the breeze? did she suck in kagura or something? ah, im so juvinile and dumb.
Sadistic Memory chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
That was very well written...when I first saw how long it would be, I had my doubts, I admit. However, you still managed to put some deeper meanings in your least, I hope that's what you were doing. D Great story.
Qem chapter 1 . 9/17/2005
I loved the way that this story spins around like the wind.

Kagura's wish to be free, the way she was being childish throughout - in her quest for independance - adulthood. o.o;