Reviews for Jaundice
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28
Nice, but there's no quotation marks, so that makes it hard to know someone is talking.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
Love it
Ceilo chapter 1 . 12/22/2008
aww, bless. that's cute in a wierd, heartbreaking kind of way. i think you're right about Kagura tho. she's so desperate to live, she never really takes the time to enjoy it.
Inu-midoriko chapter 1 . 9/14/2006
aw. that was sweet
bLoOdY9o1 chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
vary good. but im a bit confused about way they had this werid feeling and way did she lie about crying? bsorry too many questions! :s
Amber Stray chapter 1 . 11/20/2005
beautiful. simply beautiful. very niclely written. every word, every sentence, every metaphore. i never seen a story like this, let alone a one shot. and the last part was the best, i loved it! this was pure genius.
onlyanime chapter 1 . 11/19/2005
Bravo! That was really good. i loved Kagura and Ayame's conversations, they were really brilliant. Good Job!
Tzarista chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
love in blackandwhite chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
haha i thought it was a bit weird but i still liked it especially the last part...

Serpent at Sunset chapter 1 . 9/26/2005
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. The dynamics between these two ladies are so right you would think they came from the show itself. The last two senetences are what did it for me. I love your unconvential pairings. :)
unheard screams chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
Very interesting. You have a strange knack for brining what seems like random people together and having it make perfect sense.
Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
Quite interesting. The various arguements the two of them used were insightful
Aseret Kitsune chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
this is really good. i love how in character the characters are. great job! i also love the last line.