Reviews for The Chronicles: The Aphrodisiac Chronicle
Shi no Akai Tsume chapter 10 . 6/16/2010
Worst endings ever.

Dude he did not want to take advantage of the girls,idiotic, he's a guy he would've aftrer a while given in.

You did not go into details of the sex or being captured.

If he did have sex with all those girls they would have said something when he woke up.

The alternate endings sucked too.

I'm just saying they left too much making no sense.
Shi no Akai Tsume chapter 5 . 6/16/2010
Dude, you do know ninja can't have a fear of heights,they jump through trees, run up and down cliiffs, etc. And Temari has a fan that lets her glide/fly. She has wind chakra, she especially can't be afraid of heights.
noname00 chapter 10 . 7/6/2007

the ending was just so... poor naruto but hey it was funny as hell and i enjoyed reading this even though i forgot all about it cause i read up to chap 4 some months ago but hey i found it so no harm done
noname00 chapter 4 . 2/4/2007
so far me like
saiyan prince1 chapter 10 . 1/17/2007
lol nice job
Odin's Scribe chapter 10 . 1/17/2007
This was a decent ending, but I think you could have done a better job if you tried. I'm glad Naruto didn't escape though.
Tama Saga chapter 10 . 1/17/2007
"Naruto NO!" "What?" "You're supposed to drink it!" But Naruto had chugged the contents down...

You're not supposed to drink it then?
dreamlifter chapter 9 . 7/17/2006
lol at the organized seige formations
dreamlifter chapter 6 . 7/17/2006
solid chapter.
dreamlifter chapter 3 . 7/17/2006
demonic pimp... gotta love it. 3 1/2 weeks time limit was a good idea
dreamlifter chapter 2 . 7/17/2006
you've got to be shitting me! hahahaha hilarious
dreamlifter chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
pretty cool premise, humorous. what can possibly go wrong?
GOst chapter 7 . 6/25/2006
I hate u u give such antissapation then the big let down
Scyth3 chapter 9 . 6/6/2006
Falling into the horde of women.


LOL~~! You make it sound so bad. This is a great story u have here. Do bring in the next chapter soon ate ]
funkmasterjo chapter 9 . 5/16/2006
Great work, really. I'm not sure about your previous work or anything like that, but this one is a credit to you.

... and it's damn funny
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