Reviews for First Draft
BundleofContradictions chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
That was a fine piece, with a good insight into the way the protagonists think. I liked the bit about how Mine would explain the weather! That's very true to her character! :)

I don't remember when Mine called Shuro a "parasite," though.
a chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
this was just like es
angel ascendant chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
excellent characterization! Nice feel, the same as the manga gives off. I also love the attention to detail-small touches make the story real. I would love to read more ES stories by you, are you still writing them? Either way, this story is excellent. Thank you for sharing.
pendragoness chapter 1 . 3/10/2007
wow...that was awesome!
sakako chapter 1 . 5/9/2006

Cool. Concise, contemplative... very characteristic of what one might expect from the enigmatic Shuro.

If only more were aware of ES...


Sorceress Pluto chapter 1 . 12/27/2005
I'm so happy to see an ES fic up there. You did a good job capturing the feeling of his thoughts and I like the tone of your fic very much. I hope you continue to write more ES. :D