|Reviews for Two Wandering Hearts|
| An Admirer chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
There were a few parts in the middle that could have been expanded to make it flow better, but I like it. The ending gave me a little smile, and I'm happy John isn't giving up yet. Well done.
| artchess chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
Nice job! :)
| LSMunch chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
I liked it. Couple things, just as a note. There were quite a few instances where words were together with no space between them. THe other thing, I don't quite think John would go so easily with Lou. His one exwife's name is Billie Lou, so he might have some problem with that. Maybe, I don't know. But otherwise I enjoyed it. Love the beginning, up until we meet Lou, but after that's good too. I've just got a preference for the first part. Oh well.
| Munch's Next Wife chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
I love it! Munch is the best!
| Vertigomac chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
One of the few songfics that I've read that I've liked! Also liked the bartender's POV. Nicely done!