Reviews for Payback!
Musette Fujiwara chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
Sour Schuyler chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
The writing style is okay... it could use more adjectives, more description... um, and there's a typo here and there. But the story's idea is funny and I like it. _
AmiAuron chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
lol that was funny
Raccly e.r 17 chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
It's short, and could use more detail, but I understood that it's old.

You did great though! It's Very funny! And it's got a great plot!

I bet your fic's are even better now! Cuz all this really needed was more detail, and to be longer.

I hope to see more of your work soon!
DeadDeadDeadUnused chapter 1 . 9/19/2005
Moon'sHope chapter 1 . 9/18/2005
GREAT! Cute to the core!