Reviews for A Very Short Trip
xThomas2 chapter 1 . 1/20/2015
Yeah that seems about rite
Ronan101 chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Is it Kasumi? :D
authority02 chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
But the mirror would actually be granting his wish, because everyone would realise how close they were to losing him and they would treat him better as a result. Also, he would probably start to miss everyone if he went somewhere else, so actually this was the only way to fulfil the wish properly. Heh.

/Main/FridgeBrilliance
Fastidious chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Oooh, tricky .-
chronodekar chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
Depending on your point of view, this COULD be agnst/humor. I'm feeling a bit twisted right now, and well, can't decide which it could be.

Still, an interesting spamfic loosly based on the Nabam (?) mirror. Hmm... perhaps I should search for more of these fics?

-chronodekar
Demon Lord of Blood chapter 1 . 5/1/2009
hmm so whos the matchup with
paula tobor chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
thanks for posting this anyway, not all great stories are multi-volume epics. there is a short called "scenes from a life"

set in the oh my goddess world that is a classic.
loaned chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
. Nice little wisdom imparted there.
Rose1948 chapter 1 . 7/6/2007
"It wasn’t the mirror’s fault that that place was closer than he would have ever imagined."

This little story both begs for a continuance and stands very competently on it's own.
Mr. Thumbsup chapter 1 . 5/19/2007
... no.
krizue chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
cool
Yo chapter 1 . 7/6/2006
Only for what this is, it is a nice combination of vagueness and hard events. I just wish you add a hint of who the person is - though that was the point... Keep it up!
Talah chapter 1 . 2/22/2006
Nice. Very Nice. Can't go wrong with an Ozzallos fic. Have liked every single one.
Duke Bonez chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
I like the end. You can't cheat your way to perfection. And that's what he was asking a little slice of perfection.
crystlshake chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
This story though short had a lot of impact. The primary one being how it compares to the usual result of a wish granting situation. On an even deeper level in how likely something like this would happen in cannon. Then it adds a nice layer of versatility and could serve as the first chapter to any number of fics depending on how literal the mirror took his wish. One could easily apply its relevance to one of the people on the roof, or someone nearby, or even on the scale of the same world or universe. Additionaly as a more subtle aspect, how the wording of his wish would affect other characters' behavior. The last two concepts can be insinuated by the ambiguous nature of the last line.
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