Wow, i was right, orochimaru wanted him to be a vessel.

Oh man, I really hope Harry didn't just sign Tonks' death warrant.

I just wanna say jokingly about the characters: too much spell, not enough cardio. I hope it makes you laugh.

If Harry had not faked his death there would be constant threats to him and those he cares for.

Why would Harry fall to the Imperio so easily when he keeps his mind barriers up? Also, whom cast the spell?

It would have been funny would have just said "Meep Meep" to Ron as he ran past.

Harry didn't reclaim his gear that was removed...so where is it?

Ochi just fudged up...by putting that seal on Harry he started the dominos towards Harry retaliating.

Ochi is in for a very bad day when he tries to take Harry over.

I freaking loved reading this! Thanks so much! I also like the ending! I think it was a smooth transition.

I totally enjoyed this story tho at times I felt like it took so long to off Orochimaru, poor Tonks, I'd really like to see the intel she got for that 20yrs of torture hope it's that vital but I realized Harry just didn't want to kill his granpa and it gave him time with his kids. Still it's a really great story I couldn't put it down at all thank you.

if killing your enemy isn't right, then slit your own throat and be done with it. killing an enemy in battle is NOT the same as murder. it may sound the same, but there are MAJOR differences between the two.

just got to say I'm likening this fic and after reading this chapter I'm now watching Tarzan

this is some hot garbage is what I think. Should have just ditched the useless order And stuck with orochi jiji and played out normal Naruto stuff, not include wizard stuff. he could have been put through a portal and then been unique with his wizard stuff Instead of working with the order of flaming chicken.

This chapter is my favourite so far. It really showed that if there was someone to care for them unconditionally that a lot of things with everyone would've changed.