|Reviews for The Little Things|
| Katie chapter 1 . 1/16/2006
Brilliance :D Sweet and simple.
ps: Hendrix can burn for all I care, but I
| katydidit chapter 1 . 10/31/2005
Never being one to ignore cute little buttons or cuter angsty fics, I decided to review.
This was great. I love Munch a ton. *grin* Oh, right. There were other people in the story, weren't there? I think you've got Olivia down, and, based on John's character summary of Elliot and his first "words" to Olivia, I'd say you've got Elliot too.
On a medical note, I'm not sure if someone who'd sustained as much damage as the doctor said Elliot did, would wake up and be alert so quickly. But I am not a doctor and, as a reader, I will say that I wouldn't have had it any other way. :P
| a proud geekfreak chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
you know, America is the one of the few countries, when in dramas, there are happy ending. Most Europian dramas they have everyone, or the main characters, die in the end. so don't give me sh** about how this is an unhappy ending. If you were in France and written this, well I wouldn't understand a word, and Elliot would have died and then Olivia probably would have killed herself by ODing on pain killers.
anyway, GREAT story. I really, really, liked it! a whole lot. I'm very glad Ellioit woke up, and Olivia didn't kill herself. it was very sad, but I thought it had a great ending, bring a couple tears to my eyes. great job, and if you want to continue it, great. If you don't, this story is still fantastic!
| BrittanyLS chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
I like that Elliot knew what she was thinking even though he just woke up!
| AllAboutTheWriting chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
Wow, my fic inspired you? That’s so cool!
Anyway, I was just looking around and I saw this fic. It’s really well written and I think it’s a great premise. Like you said, what SVU fan doesn’t like a poor, wretched Elliot with Olivia right by his side?
I love that the first thing Elliot writes is “It’s not your fault.” It’s just so him. And I think that was a pretty good ending. Oh, brain lapse… Did you say this was a one shot? Then I guess I won’t hound you for an update. ;) Again, great story!
| artchess chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
This is wonderful! PLEASE keep writing and add another chapter!
| Sqully chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
| SparrowsFlight chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
Are you sure that you want to keep this a one shot? This is an awesome story! I don't want it to just end like that. I want more! Seriously you do some great writing. i love it. It's so powerful and realistic. I get sick of the crackpots that can't write but I fell better when someone posts a story and it's seriously good! Please keep going! I'll like give you a dollar or something? You rock!
| Writerbitch92 chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
this is so cute so far. cant wait for more.
| Nat chapter 1 . 9/20/2005
I actually think that the ending worked alright. He would know that she would be blaming herself and he just wanted to tell she's wrong. Anyways, great story.