Reviews for With Broken Wings
Mivaaa chapter 7 . 8/4/2013
I really hope you continue on with the story. I'm curious, what'll happen next?!
embrace the darkness within chapter 7 . 6/12/2013
Prime example of a fic that is in need of being completed. I actually came back and reread what was already written, hoping it was now finished. :(
Kismet's Kiss chapter 7 . 5/12/2006
yay! update update! more akira and sakura thoughts and little more FUU jealousy and Mugen jealousy would be awesome, chpaters are a little short but it's still awesome
Simetra Kain chapter 7 . 4/16/2006
Sakura...what a b*. I hope she gets what's coming to her. And soon too. Great story!
starr chapter 7 . 4/15/2006
write more real soon!
Girl-who-sings-the-blues chapter 7 . 4/5/2006
...Well, what do you know? Fuu is happy to know that...Write more soon!
Girl-who-sings-the-blues chapter 6 . 4/5/2006
Whoops! Wrong name to tell Fuu!
Girl-who-sings-the-blues chapter 5 . 4/5/2006
...Akira...uh oh!

I don't think he approves of "Fish Face" and "Rooster Head"!
Girl-who-sings-the-blues chapter 4 . 4/5/2006
...Conflict free chapter? Nope!Yah, Jin is back!
Girl-who-sings-the-blues chapter 3 . 4/5/2006
...That is exactly what he deserves, too!

Girl-who-sings-the-blues chapter 2 . 4/5/2006
...Okay...looks like Fuu has made a fine living for herself..All seems well...Eh? What's up the theose kids...They all seem so out of sad and ...I dunno...
Girl-who-sings-the-blues chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
Hah! Not another Waitress job?

Be My Forever chapter 7 . 2/25/2006
YumiDarkness chapter 7 . 2/13/2006
keep going!
Tae chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
Great story idea, but it's not written maturely enough, isn't even that funny, and it goes by WAY to fast. It's kind of OOC too. Otherwise, it's nice. Keep on writing and remember to take your time and enjoy your work...take pride in it, cuz you have lots of potential. )
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