Excellent and please update soon thanks.

loved it!

i love this movie ]

but you should try and make the chapters a little bit would help.

Hey, glad to hear something from you. It's been a while, and I was beginning to worry. Anyway...

No, Hermione, Ron's just not that good of an actor. He means it.

Huh? Mr. Weasley left? Was this something mentioned earlier in the story that I'm not remembering?

Hey! I loved the idea of making a r&hr fic based on a walk to remember. personally, I love that movie; its one of my favorites.

You've got the dialogs and you have created and adapted harry potter's world to the fic and that's grate but you really ought to describe the scenes more than that. Have you tried to read it yourself? it goes so quick that I get lost. there was a part in wehere you used one line to say "He stared at her" an other to say "He tried so hard to memorize his lines", I mean, we understand it but you need to describe more, like how they feel, what they think or even imagine, and if you dont know: come up with something.

There isn't a clear difference between scenes. In the first chapter I never knew from where colin jumped or when they got to the place, were they jumping in their same places or from a high platform? I don't know, it never says it.

Well try to apply all this advices on future chapters. Hope to be of help and not hurt you.

sorry for my bad english (im from mexico)

it was well written. I liked the lines you used from the movie. Have you ever read the book? I'm glad you began to drift away from following the movie exactlly. It is refreshing. All in all good job.

Hey you said the new chapter would be up in a day and it's over 2 months later. Why haven't you updated? Please i like this story. It's really different from all others but that's what makes it good.

OK WHAT! why cant Ron fall in Love with Hermione! plz update soon!

HEY this is really neat i love it keep up the great writing cant wait for the next chapta

It's a really good chapter. I love how the story's going. I'm thinking I should read "The Parent Trap" by Dutchtulips as this story is dedicated to it. Thus it must be a good FF. By the way it's spelled volunteer not volenteer LOL. I guess you're just proving your point. oh, do you wanna see step up on fri. amy, two friends of her's, possible Lizzye and I. It should be fun, amy's going to leave in a couple weeks and she wanted to spend some time with you and lizzye before she moves to a little town in the middle NB a province no one cares about lol. let me know if your busy/free.

O...you! hurry up and update! Argh!...okay deep breath...UPDATE NOW!

Hermioen is such a geek...but I love it! aww she's so sweet

LMAO! hahahaha, I loved the bit when Ron and Harry were going over the lines!

Is there something you're not revealing to your readers? Whether that's the case or not, I'm still reading!

Great job, but maybe... don't kill Hermione off...please. I'll give you a cookie... and a pony...please. I'd be happy to beta for you.

hey! good chapter, i liked it how u changed it from the movie...i'll be happee to be ur beta, u've seen how i write, but i honestly don't think u need one that much...but if u do, u know wat to do! :-) update soon plz! :-)