Reviews for Innocent Blue Eyes
Loulou2a chapter 14 . 6/6/2010
No, No, No, it's too too sad, I want to cry.

Tat is died, it's impossible. he and Ryuichi were so happy together. Ryu is alone now.
0987654321poiuytrewqlkjhgfdszx chapter 14 . 5/25/2010
TTTT

That was just sad...wah! -cries to the extreme- WAH!
Emiko hime-sama chapter 15 . 5/2/2010
Weell, here I am... a 13 years old criying like a crazy... hey! that was so sad... and I LOVED IT! I love angst stories! youre really amazing!

I dont blame you for bad spelling, I have too.. -.-. Despite that, it was so beautiful! it was so... so... I dont have any words.

Write something more about this, ne? I really liked it.
MisakiAkihiko chapter 14 . 11/14/2009
I am SO gonna show up at your house while you're sleeping and kill you, hang you, stab you 6 times, burn you, bring you back to life so I can do it all over again!
author chapter 14 . 9/11/2007
horrible ending, you suck
jennifer chapter 15 . 6/4/2007
whoa, lame ending
secret25 chapter 14 . 6/2/2007
NO!why did you kill him i hate this kinda endings!it was good but seriously why kill him!
secret25 chapter 8 . 6/2/2007
hehehe did you purposly made that letter rhyme...?
sunikai chapter 1 . 2/22/2007
fuck the flamers your story made me cry, and that makes it a damn good one, can't wait to read the rest of your stories,

you turned me on to the ryuXtatsu following :X and i love you for it xD
coolperson chapter 15 . 1/11/2007
that was freakin depressing (tear)
FraisesPasteque chapter 15 . 11/5/2006
Oh,so sad I like sad stories though,you know,sometimes you just need to for the spelling thing. When -I- wrote -my- first story -I- was in Seventh Grade,-I- didn't have spellcheck,and -I- was too lazy to go over it..and I got yelled at for it too,but those people have your best interest at heart,because your story is your baby,and you have to make it as good as it can be!The whole point of reviews is for people to tell you how to make it better,so if some one critizes you,thank them!It's only a flame if they yell at you becuase the characters are gay or something like YOU GO NINJA ON THEIR $$.Good story though
LaBaronessa chapter 15 . 11/5/2006
Hello hello dear. _ Seventh grade huh? Well, for being in seventh grade I am highly impressed with how you've written so far. I'm sorry for any flames you may have gotten and I agree that they are horrible and it's very unprofessional to do that. I am personally offended for you that people have the audacity to write such things when you are such a wonderful author as it is. I repeat that I'm impressed. As a freshman in college, to be completely sucked into a story written by a seventh grader is astonishing and amazing. (I is amazed) _ I congradulate you on finishing the story, and even as much as I was very saddened by the way you killed off Tatsuha-kun, I loved your story.

Keep up the good work! And.. I believe it is "psychiatrist".

Sesshisgirl (loyal fan and fic writer)
DBZVelena chapter 14 . 11/3/2006
I hate you!

Would it have killed you to give them a happy ending?

And giving a warning for bad spelling in no excuse.

There are plenty programs with spell check, USE IT!

Now if you ever decide to redo this story, give Tatsuha a happy ending ok?
ILUVBBRAE chapter 14 . 8/13/2006
WHOEVER FLAMES THIS FIC CAN GO SCREW THEMSELVES! This rox. Omfg! Tat-chan died! -cries- It's so hard to find good fics on Tatsuha and Ryuichi, so THANK YOU! for writing this. I love it! I'm adding it to mai favorites. GOOD JOB!

-ILUVBBRAE-
LuV2Writ3 chapter 14 . 7/6/2006
Wow. In a strange way, I liked it. I hate having my favorite characters die (so sad) so I try to stray away from them, but I like how you presented it, so I decided to continue writing. Your style is very unique, and while you do have spelling errors, the way you portray the emotions of your characters is wonderful. So the incorrect spelling is okay, since everything else is awesome.

The last line of the fic was simply beautiful. In an extremely, bring-tears-to-your-eyes kind of way.

Even though I do like this fic a lot, I do hope you didn't kill off my absolute favorite character just to spite all of the people who commented on your spelling. I really hope that you had it planned out like this from the beginning. It would be really upsetting to know you only killed off characters just to be mean to everyone.

But, I still did like the fic, so hopefully you will continue to write. Thanks for sharing! _

-x- LuV -x-
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