|Reviews for A new day Dawning|
| LJ Summers chapter 24 . 3/30/2013
Dunno if you will ever see this, as it's been eons since you wrote this story, but I had to tell you how charmed I've been with it all day. Should have been editing - working gorram hard, too - but no. I was trapped here in Serenity with your AU.
Thank you for the ride. It's been super and fun and my face hurts from smiling so much. I love your characterizations and how real this felt for me.
| ForEver-A-DayDreamer chapter 24 . 1/22/2013
You should of put in one more chapter ! Just like a finish off chapter :) where you could read about everyone's lives, say i dunno, 2 years later lol would of been nice to see Jayne as a dad, maybe Zoe pregnant aswell lol
| Dawns Heart chapter 12 . 1/21/2013
I love how you heard the 'prayer' on Seinfeld. I never realized it was a prayer actually, just remember my grandfather telling me it a few times, it was his favorite. It was a really nice touch.
| all forms of fluff chapter 14 . 12/6/2012
The way I see it. A story like this should have ended with Niska, or a few chapters with the fledgly open relationship. Now the plot seems to be about how much sex River and Jayne can have in a single chapter. It's not bad, just not something for me to read further into. I am off to see if any of your other stories live up to the first half of this one.
| Person Of A Strange Origin chapter 24 . 2/16/2012
I really loved this! It was a different yet exciting take on their relationship and it made me REALLY happy! :)
| Trinideanfan chapter 15 . 7/17/2011
Just found this story and, even though you wrote it a while ago, I had to tell you how great it is. This is definitely one of my favorite stories and I think you're a gifted writer. Great job!
| SusanMarieS chapter 15 . 6/7/2011
Reread the story thanks
| Chibiboku chapter 24 . 6/2/2011
That was really cute and sweet.
| baby-blue4 chapter 24 . 10/3/2010
This is by far the most adorable fic I've ever read. Well done!
| ALISOSIA chapter 4 . 8/17/2010
think it would be funny to see River bring out charts and such to convince the Cap that she and Kay should not be grounded
I could just see him with his head in his hand
| bjq chapter 16 . 3/24/2010
Did Mal use the condom correctly? How will Inara react to finding out that Mal slept with someone else? Who will get married first Jayne and River or Kaley and Simon? Will Zoe and Wash have a baby?
| SusanMarieS chapter 24 . 8/2/2009
Thank you so much for this story. I started on it yesterday and read it till 7:30 am this morning. then after teh nap i finished it. it was really good. I also like how you stayed true to their characters and surroundings. there was enough drama/angst/comedy in it to keep it interesting.
| gypsyassassin chapter 12 . 2/4/2009
no, no, didn't sound all preachy to me . . . .the prayer of serenity is a good one, easy to change to suit who you're praying to . . . or turn it into a wish or goal if you're not religious . . . . .
by the way, good work on the story. not many authors can write in the present tense without stuffing up at some point, and not many betas gan catch all the stuffups . . . . combined with a brilliant plot, well written, and an author who actually knows where to put the chapter breaks . . . .. i cannot find anywhere you can improve. go write your own books, if you can - it'll actually pay something.
then again, you might have trouble coming up with your own characters to play with . . . i've heard that basing initial characters and situations on someone you know and something you've experienced helps a lot . . . . ..
sorry, i have atendency to babble . . . . . .
| yoou chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
" I know you’ve been tortured, I saw the results. But still you can’t understand the fear of having someone holding their strength over your head. Being tied up while you’re fate lies in the whim of a monster. Knowing there is nothing you can do to stop them. Being completely helpless."
Having someone hold their strength over you and being at the whim of a monster is exactly the same thing Mal went through, kaylee didnt actually have anything done to her, how is that worse? or how could mal not understand something that he has been through and worse?
| NightmareAhead chapter 8 . 12/24/2008