Reviews for A new day Dawning
Guest chapter 14 . 5/4
I hope you realize that that River wouldn't have a hymen by this point. It would have broken the first time she used a tampon, when Jayne was fingering her, and completely gone when they used the scope. This is assuming there was anything still there considering how physically active River was as a child. The hymen isn't a magical piece of flesh that only breaks when a penis is inserted.
Wicked.Onna chapter 2 . 4/12/2017
not sure but if we go with earth calendar Kaylee had the same birthday as my own father which is kind of cool
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2017
Very good! I think you got the characters perfect.
DonnaDarko chapter 2 . 4/28/2016
Hello,
I like the storyline, but the tenses are so confused that I can't continue. I'd be happy to beta for you if you'd like to do some rewrites.
Thanks,
DonnaDarko
shika93 chapter 24 . 12/25/2015
Awesome story.
shika93 chapter 23 . 12/25/2015
Awesome!
shika93 chapter 19 . 12/25/2015
Haha AWESOME.
shika93 chapter 16 . 12/25/2015
Good chapter.!
shika93 chapter 14 . 12/25/2015
Aw good chapter.
shika93 chapter 13 . 12/25/2015
Ha good chapter.
shika93 chapter 11 . 12/25/2015
Good chapter
shika93 chapter 2 . 12/24/2015
Good chapter
Serenityin2 chapter 24 . 10/28/2015
Love this story, glad everyone got a happy ending. Would love to see Jayen as a dad.
Clementine Buttersnaps chapter 4 . 8/7/2015
River is such a badass. I wish she wasn't so young in the show, I seriously think Jayne would have liked her.

And how adorable to picture a little River bringing out charts and graphs to prove her point with her dad and get out of trouble.
Clementine Buttersnaps chapter 3 . 8/7/2015
Oh Jayne and his dirty mind.

And now he's all sweet and making sure she doesn't fall off her bunk. He just needs to figure out he's hot for her. Haha.
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