Reviews for Yugi's point of view
TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
You should write more often when you have insomnia. It's thought-provoking.

brittney
lara alexis chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
It was a decent story.
Phantom Fox chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Hm...Very Good, even though I have a sometimes short attention span, and stopped reading to play solitaire...stupid addictive game...

And lil' Yugi's musings are true; How innocent *is* innocent? Especially if you love the darkness incarnate that is in every human's soul?

; Eh heh...sorry..Real good story tho!
DaakuKitsune chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
I like it! _ Seriously, this was *really* good.
yugirules chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
That was a great story. Yugi got me thinking about a lot of things too. So that was awesome!

Kay
Inari-san chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Weird, chilling, satisfying, sweet, well-written.

Those are the words I can use to describe this story. I could probably think of better ones if there wasn't 70's music blaring in my ears. Im sorry I can't review well, it's not one of my strong points. But I had to say something. You write well.
PyrrhicVictories chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
nice. You might want to go over it for slight errors and word deletions, but over all very nice work _.