Reviews for The Line
AlysanneLake chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Good grief, this is hot with all the things that DON'T happen in it.

Is this continued somewhere else?
Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Mmm-mmmm-mmm! Wooww!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Ooooooooohhh! Naughty dog! That is a no!no!
loritakitochan chapter 1 . 1/7/2007
very interesting!whats happen next?

update please!
tectrices chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
I... I think I liked this. I don't mean to sound rude or anything like that, I'm just... confused. You're a very good writer and it is SO pleasing when one finds a fic that isn't laden down with so many errors that it is easy to forget there are supposed to be words. Also, the idea was interesting. I'm afraid I'm missing something that I really should get, though... (Wouldn't be the first time.) Anyway! Great job. Oh, and by the way- loved your Shigure.
Crazy fanfic girl loves-anime chapter 1 . 11/12/2005
Hey are you gonna update i hope so i want to know what happens so update soon.
Crunchy Snape chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
Wow! I love this side of Shigure, so full of sarcasm!

Excellent job!

Definitely going to my Favorite list!

~Crunchy Snape
fallendreamz chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
oh god, that's just scary. I cant say that i cant imagine akito doing that, even WHEn she's fourteen...but still ._. poor shigure.
Joflower chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Wow, I can't see Akito-san as being so... kinky (LOL) at 14. And right in front of everyone (almost everyone...)!

I wonder what will happen next...

(I'm working on a story where Shigure got Akito pregnant when she was 15-16 and he finds out 13 years later that he had a daughter when Akito dies and he has to raise her now... if you're interested you might want to check it out! - "ShugoTenshi")

I look forward for more!