Reviews for Crush Depth
Ookami Youma chapter 2 . 5/26/2012
hey, i think you have chapter 2 in the wrong story.
junjou-yume chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
WOW. You write really well! All those military terms and stuff, its very detailed! I like this story a lot, but where is chapter 2? It can't be complete already, it just got started! Don't forget about this story, it's an amazing one! I hope to read the rest soon!


I think therfore I exist chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
I can not help but wonder that whatever coupling sosuke did that was not with another militar, would end very bad. They did not complete the novels, even though it is settled for Kaname cannon, the anime itself is still plain open for a reverse plot, they are researching opinions (like all the industry does) which will define if there should be a continuation and which couples should happen. Regarding you story, it is too soon for me to evaluate the storyline, but in terms of grammar, character, and linearity, it is going quite well. I would say you can accumulate a large fanbase given the lack of update to other fics with same pairings, if not soon, I bet most readers would appreciate a new release until 2009 at least, otherwise it will die down most likely, something which would be a waste of potential.

Obs: I am not sure if you made a continuation as a different story, I will check it, but since I suppose not, update please.
Kanae-88 chapter 1 . 9/22/2008
Wonderful. Is this just an oneshot, or are you planning to continue it?
fallenmad chapter 1 . 1/8/2008
HEY! No update on this? Please?
RandomReview chapter 1 . 8/24/2007
You have written a really nice story here, the couples you have chosen is also a major plus. There aren't a lot of Tessa/Sousuke fics out there...

So please, update this story.

I know that you are still a somewhat active writer, so please update this story from time to time. You ended with something ominous, and I believe that two years is a long enough time to sate your readers thirsts...

'till then_
FatalTitan chapter 1 . 8/23/2007
awesome story! i just finished fmp and i loved it! i really like tessa too so im very eager to see where your story goes )
Jobrill chapter 1 . 5/29/2006
This is an awesome, awesome beginning. I haven't been as dissapointed at finding an Incomplete fic in quite a while (Like I have room to complain, my own fics are somewhat unfinished). But this is an excellent foundation to what could be a great work, exploring the ways in which lovers differ and part, and the sticky love triangle of Tessa, Sousuke, and Kaname.
midlight bunny chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
I'm really glad this is a Sousuke/Tessa fic because these are interesting and rare...

I liked how you captured the feelings of Kaname, Sousuke, and Tessa... I can imagine them having the same thoughts and feelings.

I really hope that you continue this fic...

I've waited years for some others. )
SYNAPSE chapter 1 . 3/25/2006
So far so good. But unfortunately, I'm not a big fan of Tessa. heh

Can you write something about Kaname and Leonard? Thnx!
Despite chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
A continuation...nicely crafted, definite tension, I'm waiting for more.
Yo chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
Interesting chapter. The emotions, military decorum, and such were all there. This has great potential; however, as some people pointed out, some more interactions between the main characters would have made the premise feel more solid. As another person mentioned, it is dramatic but not wholy believable. The the thoughts and feelings are there but the vacillation over Tessa does not seem completely warranted. You did explain the problems with Kaname, but it just did not seem to completely click.

Of course the very last paragraph is the other side of the plot, but it felt completely out of place with the rest of the chapter. There is all this drama and then suddenly, a short paragraph about a devious plot...

I hope you update sometime!
Dee chapter 1 . 1/11/2006
well brother dear, you know that I am a Kaname/Souske fan and for exactly the reason that the wonderfully executed and TOTALLY believable fight (despite what these others say) between Souske and Kaname at the beginning of the fic... the passion... it's all about the passion... his difficulty showing his and her difficulty in hiding her's. tessa is too... lame... in comparison.

Wanderering Ficreader chapter 1 . 10/20/2005
Hey good story man like how its going so far hope you continue it. There just isn't enough S/T fics out there. Well keep up the good work.
Kumorigoe chapter 1 . 10/18/2005
Excellent story, with good grammar, a solid plotline, and an intriguing first chapter. One small correction, however. Melissa Mao is a Sergeant Major, not a Master Sergeant. Sergeant Major is the higher rank, and is the senior enlisted person for a military command.
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