|Reviews for The Edges of Things|
| LoyaulteMeLie chapter 1 . 4/14
Extremely poignant. Sometimes it really does take a sharp shock like that to make you realize what's important - and what you may be in danger of losing...
| Bamboo Pug chapter 1 . 11/14/2005
a very moving fiction...i enjoyed it but it moved me deeply.
| GallyGee chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
Ah, this was quite, quite wonderful. I had to pause a moment when I reached the end.
I was there with Trip, all the way, thoroughly grounded in whatever he is experiencing. I love your use of language - it is precise, yet poetic and still I can believe it is Trip's voice.
There are some fabulous lines in this - too many to list.
This is one I particularly liked:
"The edges of things, Trip thought. Some do fade with time, others get crisper, the feelings sharper."
Thank you for posting this.
| spootycup chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
That was sweet and really good.. i liked it a lot
| Rinne chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
| Hisster chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Wonderful. Very touching and deep.
| volley chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Well, I read this because it said very mild slash and I like your style. The story is nice and well written. Still, I don't like slash and just wish authors, when possible, like in short stories of this kind, posted two versions... forgive me if I suggest this; but it seems there are so many slash and so few friendship stories...
Beautiful writing, anyway.