Reviews for Ritual
Anita chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
Wow, I wasn't sure if it was going to work, but it really did. Very very interesting take on the three doctors. I especially like how you described House affects them all. Really good job! :)
Lucifer's Toy chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
I thought this was a very intrigueing story. Something that probably shouldn't have worked, but did. I really liked it. I'd love to see more of this pairing/threesome.
abcdefga chapter 1 . 11/26/2005
Monstrosity? I worship you!

My god, I have absolutely nothing but praise. Damn it, here I am trying to develop a critical self, and you're writing better than the *show's* writers! Guh...

I loved it. Characterization was great. I was a little confused at first with the Cameron getting herself drunk, because it doesn't seem to fit her personality, but as the story developed I understood it more. This is just... fantamazastical. -shakes head-

More words escape me. So, NEVER giv eup writing. Ever. Or I *will* find you and... I don't know...

Regardses, Calwyn.
house-of-insanity chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
WOW.

That was craziness, man. Good craziness, though. I've never been a fan of slash, personally, and I've never actually read a threesome thing before...can't scar my virgin eyes. :P But that was REALLY good, if a little spooky. You did a really good job of making the whole relationship believable, and it was an excellent story.
Raindrops on Roses chapter 1 . 9/23/2005
OMFG. (flails) You wrote my Duckling OT3! You are officially my new hero. This was so poignant and sad and I LOVED it.
Nikelodean chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
Hello. Well...I do not remotely like slash, so I felt uncomfortable with that aspect of it. I did like the way you described their relationship and how it changes, for the worse, whenever House is around. Good writing job and especially good job on how you characterized Cameron.
teasun89 chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
please please please please please continue. I love it i love it i love it!:D
ElvenDestiny chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
Wow...it was strange reading F/C/C (I write C/C, though, so it's similar) but you pulled it off perfectly. I'm glad you kept it to just one chapter, it's more poignant that way. Kudos [Greek for praise, not the cookie/bar/whatever it is] to you for being one of the best House authors out there!

~ E.D.
Sandy at Sea chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
Great piece of writing - poignant and true. The little hints, building to a crescendo - and then the realisation that things will go on, there is no end to the ritual.

I especially like your characterisation of Cameron - needy and self-absorbed, blind to everything except herself. She really needs to be needed and this is not a particularly attractive aspect of her character.

The relationship between Foreman and Chase is oh-so right. From the first inkling, to the climax - it is perfect, echoing the melancholic tone of the whole piece, the longing for what cannot be and the loathing for what is.

Excellent!
Adnawun chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Hey, I still stand my comments where I first read this.

'cept now I can actually fave it.

- Alz
Duct Tape Fairy chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Definately different, but I quite liked it. Honestly, I think part of the charm comes from it being so unique, but I really liked the flow of things. And the sense of how delicately the ducklings were trying to handle each other. Well done.
Pgnpxi chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
That was a beautiful story. Really, you got the characters DOWN and I am incredibly impressed! You've managed to instill a sense of love that somehow mingles with pain and uncertainty, and still came out with a seamless piece of work. Wonderful, just wonderful.
Buzzkill Bunny chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
And yet I liked this so much. It's very hard to classify.

Relationships are so complicated and yours is deliciously so. I don't like slash, but I'm finding more and more of it appealing. Must be the hooyay in the show rubbing off.

At any rate, this is top notch work. Engaging and strange and fun.

Thanks!