|Reviews for Is he finally growing up?|
| omniFAIRYous chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
I think you meant "straight" rather than "strait".
Same issues as the last story I read: commas and long sentences (some to the point of not being a proper sentence)! Oh, and I found some tense issues too... I'm also a bit confused about where this took place. On the train or at Hogwarts?
But I like how you had Lily think through her reasons for a Potter-free life only to realize she may have been wrong.
| Nintendo Queen chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
Screw the idiot who said you failed this paper. It rocked out loud. Deni, forget those losers. They're just jealous of your talent and brains.
Also, you DESERVED the A you got. DESERVED IT I SAY...wow...Spearmint really makes me hyper. Anyway, see you 2-morrow-
| hoummas chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
| Kylaya chapter 1 . 9/22/2005
Aww, that was good - athough, Lily doesn't sound very nice at the minute... but i'll be really interested to see how she turns out. Good work :-)
| Flair Verona the Slytherin Queen chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
This was awesome and I do hope you got a good grade for it!
| Err-themoonrulznumberone chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
And you...failed that paper right?
| Gogglehead Lover chapter 1 . 9/21/2005
Wow what a good story. Really it is awesome. I love it bye.