|Reviews for Because of Her|
| Sol chapter 1 . 2/18
Definitely loved it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
This is sweet :)
| Damonmylife chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
Aww man I hope you continue this and make it so that Ash actually loves May not Misty. And I would love to read Ash's point of view!
| Unicess chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
Aww. See, this is why I love Misty and May! This is so unique! I love how you made it from May's point of view, but on a completely different level. You were able to make Ash, Misty and May all the main characters! Its really sweet.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2013
I LOVED your story, Ash and Misty were portrayed PERFECTLY as was their relationship!
| Kasumi Ayuzawa chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
one of the BEST AAML one shot from a third person's view.. really loved reading it... exactly point it but this story has got something all AAML fans love.. thankyou for a super fic.. .
| Karin Searim chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
Amazing-but it was really sad from poor May's perspective.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
KYAAAA! :3 I absolutely love pokeshipping! You are the exact reason why I fangirl inside XD Any way, even though I feel sorry for May and her unrequited love, I really respect her for the decision to not confess to Ash and let his and Misty's love continue.
Sorry for my rant but I really liked the way you wrote this fanfic and I really hope to hear from you soon! .
Going on my faves,
Ciao Phoebe, TTYL8R :D
| togekiazu chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
I think you did a really good job on this story. I think everyone was mostly in character. It was so wonderful yet sad, you almost made me cry. ;A; It made me want Ash to notice her. And May thinks so much. Yay.
I congratulate you. QuQ
| Anitoon3 chapter 1 . 11/25/2011
This is good!
But sad! Because May will never be with Ash! :(
This totally describes me.
And he doesn't even notice her! Jeez...
The part about her wanting to be angry with her but can't is so true. And I think if she did, that it'd make Ash not like her...maybe.
I like that this was in May's point of view! You made her pain and jealousy realistic!
| Misty chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
AMAZING I LOVED IT!
| waddles4lyfe chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
This story was so sad, heartbreaking, and amazing. You can pretty much feel May's pain. It's so sweet. I guess you're story is a really good example of how everything changes with point of view. While I was reading this story, I wanted Ash to be in love with May even though I'm usually a pokeshipper. This was lovely, keep up the good work!
p.S. i accidentally wrote reviewed this on dont take the girl so just ignore that comment
| Aaml chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Liked it. Well written and even if you don't think so, you portrayed the characters very well. Good job
| Nikki chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
I'm more of a contestshipper and I got into pokeshipping. At first I thought this was gonna be a advanceshipping O.o one with the misty being flammed. I've read one where may even made out with ash while he got with misty! And that was just OOC. This is just how those love triangles should be written. No need for b**ch fight's in them.
| Steveaaml chapter 1 . 5/5/2010
Oh loved it!
Poor May, but so sweetly written, and one of the nicest interpretations of her jealousy that I've ever read. No May-bashing, just compassion and sweetness and every good thing.
Loved the bit with Ash battling, reminded me of the Trovita episode.
Wonderfully written. Great work :)