Reviews for Mistakes
pinki84297 chapter 6 . 3/17/2007
Im a little confused.
mara chapter 8 . 12/29/2005
Hello!

I am pleased to read this wonderful story! :0)

I loved your excuse for the missing presence of Destiny in the Mummy Returns, haha, absolutely great!

Congratulations! a kiss and a hug this New Year's Eve!

maría
Cookie044 chapter 8 . 12/27/2005
I enjoyed this story also. So talented and so little time.
Vote14Caskett chapter 8 . 12/19/2005
awesome chapter!
Vote14Caskett chapter 7 . 12/18/2005
omg! I love it!
grelca chapter 7 . 12/14/2005
Aww this is such a cute story. Update it! :P

And all the chapter titles are song names.
Egyptian Princess of 1290 bc chapter 4 . 12/6/2005
amazon . com
immortalwizardpirateelf-fan chapter 7 . 12/4/2005
Aw...little Alex is such a cutie pie.
maria chapter 7 . 12/4/2005
update soon! this is getting even better!

By the way, they are rumours telling that Rachel Weisz may be pregnant... :)

greetings,

maria
maria chapter 7 . 12/3/2005
My Lord! sha la la la...

This is like the best soap opera! hahaha

Cute, romantic, charming! I love it! update my friend! :)

greetings from México,

maria
maria chapter 6 . 12/1/2005
My God! Each time I read it, each time I get more hooked!

This is a privilege to read, my dear friend :)

I am really sorry for yoru grandmother, I am sure she is very proud of you!

congratulations and update as soon as possible!

greetings from México,

mary
Evelyn Carnahan-O'Connell chapter 6 . 11/14/2005
plz update soon! this is getting good!
maria chapter 6 . 11/6/2005
Hello, I am from México.

Let me tell you... your story is marvelous! hilarious!

I cannot wait to the next chapter, really I am hooked!

Excellent! continue soon please! :)

greetings,

mary
Eviefan chapter 6 . 11/2/2005
Hey, doing good. I really like this story and each chapter I read you seem to be improving on detail and fun stuff like that. I wonder how RIck is going to take her not telling him about Alex until now.

Now the critical part of the review. When you do their thoughts, it isn't nessary to bold them like that go ahead and put the ", or if I'm doing a thought I usually do a 'the thought' like that. Detail is still a good thing, so keep going with that because you are doing better.

Okay now go off and write more please I want to see what happens.
Ashley Carnahan chapter 6 . 10/29/2005
Ah, this is very sweet! Do carry on!

Things about what happened between Evy and Rick are everywhere, even I'm planning to do one shortly, but so far, this is easily my favourate _!

Luv Ash
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